Saturday, March 1, 2014

The Ides of March

                                                                                           Attribution: Arild Vegan
Image: Early morning scene (here)

A silhouette far in the distance
Waving frantically all too confident
Darting across only in an instance
And back again but not alone

How to explain such happenings
Apparitions so ‘alive’ so elusive
In the wee hours of the mornings
Playing tricks nebulous but active

Beware earthlings of ones untouched
Strange beings let loose found roaming 
Invisible in most parts but were such
They teamed up waiting in the wings

Youngsters led astray not realizing
Ladies smothered left dead than alive
Soothsayers sounded early warnings
To be prepared for Ides of March

For Mary's hosting at d'Verse writing on  - Poetics:  invisibility

20 comments:

  1. interesting..had to look this up... sometimes things happen that are not visible but will change the world in a way we would've never expected

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  2. eeep...two weeks from today....beware for sure if you are ceasar...but also if you happen to be one of the sacrifices to be made on that day as well....

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  3. This is all new to me too! I had never heard of these 'strange beings let loose' before but I enjoyed the way you portrayed this phenomenon.

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  4. given the news I read from Krim today ... I'm concerned about these invisible forces... really frightening.

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  5. Ah yes, sometimes those near-invisible silhouettes can be a bit eerie. And...thanks for the heads up on the Ides of March, Hank!

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  6. Interesting play on the Shakespeare. Smiles. >KB

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  7. I never knew about this but thanks for the warning ~ Eerie play on those invisible forces ~

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  8. Oh so well done Hank - one of your (many) best, I think.
    Anna :o]

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  9. Very eery, Hank. You wove your tale so well.

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  10. I'm taking to my bed for the Ides! Especially if they turn out the way you describe them! An eery read, as Sherry says!

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  11. Chilling, and very well penned. I love it.

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  12. I'll hide away like a hermit to avoid such a fate

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  13. an eerie piece indeed. I would not care to cross paths with such apparitions.

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  14. Hank, I had to read a bit on this ..interesting write for the prompt..

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  15. Excellent and so appropriate on this first day of March.

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  16. had to look up ides of march and read this over... glad I did, bcus I'm spooked now... eek

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  17. It fall on 15 March this year; I just checked it out on google.
    The image of the silhouette is powerful, becoming very much so in relation with the last stanza. There is that feel of a Gothic horror novel in your words.. which I find amazing.
    -HA

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  18. *I used to think that Ides occur on the 13th or 15th date of March, but reading about it just now revealed that it always falls on 15th of March. My bad! :-)

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  19. Ah! I too had to look it up. It was a bit of eerie reading for me - though scary I must admit that I liked the uniqueness.

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