Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Beings of Piety

                                                                                                  Author: Man vyl
Image:  Pilgrims to Hermitage St Helier (here)

Calm souls engrossed in
acts of solace bequeathed to
beings of piety

Reaching out upon
blessings befitting of a
religious order

Akin to flowers’
tenacious push to survive
through adverse ill-will

Pilgrims’ journey paved
with thorns but surmounted by
faith of lighted path

For Chev's CARPE DIEM #406

10 comments:

  1. The third one is the best commentary on pilgrim's progress...thoughtfully arranged....

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  3. i def like the third as well...nature makes for a great metaphor for spirituality

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  4. The path can be rough, but it can pay off if one keeps on it

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  5. Oh.. I had not read all the comments before.. but I really like the third too.

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  6. Perhaps there are roses as well as the thorns? One hopes!

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  7. I agree Pilgrims Progress about sums up your wonderful words.
    Yvonne.

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  8. I like the faith of lighted path ~

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