acts of solace bequeathed to
beings of piety
Reaching out upon
blessings befitting of a
religious order
Akin to flowers’
tenacious push to survive
through adverse ill-will
Pilgrims’ journey
paved
with thorns but surmounted by
faith of lighted path
For Chev's CARPE DIEM #406
The third one is the best commentary on pilgrim's progress...thoughtfully arranged....
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ReplyDeleteThorny ways aren't all bad, are they? ;)
ReplyDeleteContinuing Pilgrimage
i def like the third as well...nature makes for a great metaphor for spirituality
ReplyDeleteThe path can be rough, but it can pay off if one keeps on it
ReplyDeleteOh.. I had not read all the comments before.. but I really like the third too.
ReplyDeletePerhaps there are roses as well as the thorns? One hopes!
ReplyDeleteI agree Pilgrims Progress about sums up your wonderful words.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
I like the faith of lighted path ~
ReplyDeleteThe third really stands out
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