Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Snow flakes floating down

                                                                                                    Author: Sb2s3
 Image: Falling snow flakes (here)

Drab Sunday morning
Musing for walk in the sun
Viewed from the window

Snow flakes floating down
Dancing merrily in step
Tired bones creaking

For Chev's CARPE DIEM writing
technique #21 -  mixing it up
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10 comments:

  1. Reading PleasureDecember 2, 2015 at 4:35 AM

    Very nicely done.

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  2. Pat HattDecember 2, 2015 at 5:03 AM

    Creak they will, the snow and cold are no thrill

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  3. humbirdDecember 2, 2015 at 6:58 AM

    Last line made me smile...Very nicely done, Hank.

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  4. Carol CampbellDecember 2, 2015 at 7:32 AM

    That chill is in the air! Well written!

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  5. Alex J. CavanaughDecember 2, 2015 at 11:21 AM

    No sun but walking in the snow would be cool.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 2, 2015 at 11:44 AM

    amazing one.

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  7. TournesolDansUnJardinDecember 3, 2015 at 6:33 PM

    I love them both and yet they both make me feel different...the first one makes me feel winter is better watched from inside but the second makes is fun to walk in the snow:) But I can so relate to the creaking bones.

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  8. lynn__December 4, 2015 at 2:40 PM

    I like the different moods of a snowy day...fun photo!

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 5, 2015 at 5:23 PM

    chapeau Hank !

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  10. AnonymousDecember 6, 2015 at 9:57 PM

    Im like it Snow flakes floating down, thanks for share.

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