Sunday, May 15, 2016

The last he remembered was being helpless

                                                                                       Attribution: Rennett Stowe
Image: Sad-looking Cousin (here)

12 given words:
hung burning enter white made less
last fish flowers cloth took screen

Head hung low it was a burning question
It had as yet to enter his cluttered mind
White with rage barely moments ago
Made to look less guilty but not quite
The last he remembered was being helpless
Like fish out of water no garland of flowers
But a piece of cloth covering his head

He took exception when told his sibling
Was given preference over him
Many were screened for the position
He was sad just could not stomach it
Why they preferred a younger person?

For Brenda's Sunday Whirl Wordle #251
Mary's at PU's Poetry Pantry  #302

23 comments:

  1. Preference for no reason but age and appearance can be crippling. But it happens. A sad reflection on souless elements of our society.

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  2. For the chimp my guess it was his potential fertility...no wonder he looks grumpy!

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  3. Ah, sad that even among chimpanzees there is age discrimination!

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  4. It's sad not being selected... to be left out or passed by youth. That poor chimp looks so sad.

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  5. Such deep disappointments can render us helpless indeed!

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  6. Every living being has its day i suppose and the younger sibling is all too ready to take their place - poor old ape

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  7. Tragic to learn that even chimpanzees are victim to such discrimination. Excellent write.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  8. You wove such a good story with the words, Hank. It is the way of the world, youth preferred over age, wisdom and experience. Sigh.

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  9. Hank it is sad when one is passed by because of age. Especially when one is seeking employment. What happened to experience?

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  10. Youth has it all. Name it,
    'they' even think they're wise
    Remember way back when,
    "age comes before beauty?"
    ..

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  11. Nicely written, Hank. A subject the older tries to not think about.
    ..

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  12. Age can sure play a factor in many things. He sure doesn't look happy.

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  13. Others put us in the aging box

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  14. Sorry, but I thought of something else. Yes, he may be sad, but what if his younger sibling was chosen for testing, or for some type of grueling experiment? Perhaps his age saved him from a rather nasty outcome,

    Elizabeth

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  15. Ah yes, a difficult situation. I love the picture - so illustrative of the mood you describe.

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  16. Wonderful picture, I am not a monkey but I've had age related problems. Great write Hank.
    Yvonne.

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  17. I can relate to this as I get older and the preference for younger folks becomes clearer. This is a neat idea to take 12 words and create something from them.

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  18. Youth is often chosen first. A sad reflection on one's competence.

    Congratulations on getting Alex's You Rock Award.

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  19. Other opportunities will always present themselves. One must wait to see what develops. Enjoyed your poem, Hank. Nicely done.

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  20. Love the illustration and poem together! We do lose some of our humanity in envy.

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  21. It seems the selection was for being displayed in captivity. Perhaps he just doesn't know he's the lucky one.

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  22. The youth and the feeling of youthless-ness?

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  23. Age discrimination is everywhere. That, and how you look. Who says life is fair?

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