Thursday, May 26, 2016

colors to savor calmness

                                                                                                Attribution: Kaz Andrew
Image: Apple Blossoms (here)

silence
in the blind wind's dance
blossoms                                           (Jane Reichhold)
into unending waves with
colors to savor calmness                   (Hank)

silence
in the blind wind's dance
blossoms                                           (Jane Reichhold)
in all directions softly
with brilliance of light whispers           (Hank)

For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga
Challenge  -  silence - by Jane Reichhold
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4 comments:

  1. Alex J. CavanaughMay 26, 2016 at 11:49 AM

    I think your paired well with the original!

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  2. CloudiaMay 26, 2016 at 4:05 PM

    I like how you drew it all home, Hank

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  3. Dr. Vandana SharmaMay 26, 2016 at 10:02 PM

    Lovely! I see that you have used such nice words which when seen individually are completely opposite of silence , but when read in the poem they completely represent silence!! Very nice really.

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  4. Pat HattMay 27, 2016 at 5:43 AM

    A subtle scene that is oh so serene

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