Saturday, January 23, 2016

The vanquished would often pay a heavy price

                                                                                 Author: Thierry Caro
Image: Two gold dust day geckos
fighting on a banana trunk (here)

Sunday Whirl 10 of 12 given words:
fix fight hit risk action state 
heavy hours end team 

Selfishly they would fix their territorial rights
Triumphant young one would seek to replace
No negotiations but pitting strength with a fight
They decided the extent of influence of space

Law of the jungle had been fair and universal
Dominant male would hit hard at pretenders
Who risk being ostracized as a direct reprisal
For any actions or attempts to topple the elders

This state of affairs were dealt with precision
The vanquished would often pay a heavy price
Hours to end a dispute with bloody consequence
Natural attrition of team strength as no surprise

Brenda's Sunday Whirl Wordle #235 and
Mary's at PU's Poetry Pantry #286

20 comments:

  1. Ah, the law of the jungle isn't always fair, but it is what it is!

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  2. Agree with Magaly, the survival of the meanest and perhaps the fittest! Nicely done :D

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  3. Surviving takes strength or wit or a bit of both. The jungle of life can be tough.

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  4. Nothing is fair when it comes to one winning in the wild.

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  5. How funny humans can feel these primal urges to fight with bloody consequences....and we have the gift of higher thinking, compassion etc if we chose to use them....but we just seem to stay in these primal urges....nice poem!

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  6. You have captured the way of the world through millenia, Hank.

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  7. And so it continues, this need to be the best, the strongest, the one on top,

    Elizabeth

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  8. Oh that cruel law... but we always have to battle or win don't we?

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  9. You capture well the law of the jungle with your word choices in this---words like 'ostracized' and 'toppled' and 'vanquished' :-)

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  10. Survival of the fittest seems cruel except when you compare it with mankind where it is survival of the wealthy and bigoted regardless of consequences or the good of the world.

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  11. I liked this poem Hank. It makes me think of humans as well.

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  12. We seem to forget that Nature has more than one way, and we can still choose between them,

    Elizabeth

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  13. I guess the quintessential question is, "Why". Why is there so much aggression in animals, and we are animals with conscious brains.

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  14. The way of the world :( good poem Hank

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  15. Well you have successfully capture the world's wicked ways.

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  16. The jungle has a law unto themselves I believe Hank.
    Another good verse.
    Yvonne.

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  17. A principle which seems to apply across species!

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