Image: 1928 Model A Ford (here)
PU’s Midweek Motif
food
Sunday Whirligig’s 11 of 12 given words:
memory father trembling
logic fumbling
untie tight knot shoes trying anger
3WW #462 given words:
harrowing imperfect lame
Food for thought so clear in his mind
In memory of his late father trembling
A harrowing experience he remembered
Defied logic in this imperfect world
How did this mean looking machine go
Faster than a horse he could not fathom
He was fumbling in thoughts when as a tiny
Tot he was invited to climb on board the car
As though to untie a tight knot of his shoes
Akin to trying to suppress anger more than
fright
A lame effort as he was just as excited
As a joey out of the pocket for the first time
He still remembered it very well
He still remembered it very well
It had happened many many years ago
One fine morning his father brought it home
A Ford A a more modern version of the classic Ford T
Still a mean looking machine he mused quietly
The first of its kind in the neighborhood
For MMT's at Sunday Whirligig #42
Thomg's at 3WW #462
what a lovely story is told in this
ReplyDeleteSounds like a good memory with all the thrill of a scary movie.
ReplyDeleteQuite a tale!
ReplyDeletean enjoyable read Hank...
ReplyDeleteGreat as always Hank, one can always expect a good read here.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
That is quite a car and story Hank ~
ReplyDeleteI think it might have been great to ride in such a car as this!
ReplyDeleteSure a car like no other indeed. Memories can be held in anything. Experiencing a car for the first time would be amazing, now we just are meh.
ReplyDeleteA poignant and endearing memory you've penned AND including two separate prompts. Wow!
ReplyDeleteA gripping tale. Very well compoed
ReplyDeleteQuite a brilliant write :D thanks for linking in at Prompt Nights :D
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
This took me back to when my dad brought a new car home......uch celebration. Love the description of him as a tot riding for the first time on the metal machine. Cool.
ReplyDeleteAh! The excitement of being the one to possess what none of the neighbors do!
ReplyDeleteOwner's pride :)
My grandfather told me stories of his first ride in a car - what an experience. You give it life Hank
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