Image: A rare and jaw-dropping anti-cyclonic
tornado touches down in open farmland, narrowly
missing a home near Simla, Colorado (here)
of impending bad news
largely of what to expect
How and in what form
you preferred not to reveal
Instead you unleashed the
immense power of destruction
and death with such fury and
ferocity that one could only
wait in a trance terrified
Was this some form of
retribution for past sins?
(55 words)
For Kerry's Flash 55 Plus
at Real Toads
A spectacular image indeed, very vivid writing.
ReplyDeleteOh yes.. We are all sinners, and that fury is hiding underneath
ReplyDeleteHeart stopped for a moment
ReplyDeletenice poem
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Glad those don't come around here, have to really tick someone off to get that kind of retribution.
ReplyDeleteI can't believe that, but certainly it is a common idea, and you express it well here--I'm sorry that many of your comments on my blog have been going to spam! Just looked through and found them. Thanks. k.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful image excellent portrayed Habk.
ReplyDeleteYvonne
Getting right with God would certainly go through my mind in such an event. As a knee-jerk reaction, I'd confess my sins, though I know that tornadoes have nothing to do with my sins. I can feel the desperation. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThat's immense power of destruction all right!
ReplyDeleteI often wonder at the power of nature and why and how she strikes the earth. I think we are all sinners but, that funnel will cause major havoc for any in its path.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool, Hank!
ReplyDeleteNicely written, scary reading, Hank. It reminds me of some of the reactions to our NYC's terrorist destruction to the Twin Towers.
ReplyDeleteFor example, "... television evangelist Jerry Falwell called the event a punishment from God and laid the blame on "paganists", "abortionists", "feminists" and "gays and lesbians", claiming that they "helped this happen"."
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Wow .. here in Italy we someone speak of people who are particularly emotional as "a force of nature" Think you ran into one of those for sure! Bastet
ReplyDeleteYeah, maybe it is. One can't help but think so anyway, when crazy destructive shit like this befalls. Strong poem, I like it a lot.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year, Hank!
It makes you wonder what happened to anger Mother Nature. Powerful piece!
ReplyDeleteHank, a splendid 55. Galen would have loved it ~
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