Image: To transport nitrates from
its mines to the port, the Company
operates a 3 ft 6 in gauge railway (here)
MLMM's 12 given words:
gasps left cold angels loss dust snare
remember pause days dial slap
remember pause days dial slap
gasps of bewilderment left some cold
sweat where even angels were the loss
for words thinking of the efforts and
sweat where even angels were the loss
for words thinking of the efforts and
risks in trying to earn a decent living
dust and stones may cause to spring
a snare on the freedom and safety of
transporting the load a slow operation
already with the long line of wagons
a snare on the freedom and safety of
transporting the load a slow operation
already with the long line of wagons
they just had to remember to pause and
hope nothing untoward should happen on
days of likely strong winds where the
ability to dial on the cell phone was
of little assurance
hope nothing untoward should happen on
days of likely strong winds where the
ability to dial on the cell phone was
of little assurance
heavenly for a locomotive driver out of
work slapped with the moral responsibility
of having to feed hungry mouths praying and
waiting in a dilapidated shack at the bottom
of the hill for his safe return every evening
work slapped with the moral responsibility
of having to feed hungry mouths praying and
waiting in a dilapidated shack at the bottom
of the hill for his safe return every evening
interesting poem
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To have a family to feed is an obligation indeed
ReplyDeletequite chilling...hope nothing untoward ever happens...
ReplyDeleteThat reminds me of a road In drove along in Bolivia! Brilliant and totally different take on the words.
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nature is still the number one enemy of technology. better late than sorry, I guess.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year
wow...crazy image, and a great way of weaving the words together describing it!
ReplyDeleteThe things many have to do to feed their family isn't easy.
ReplyDeleteSuch palpable images here - powerful write.
ReplyDeleteOh that ledge does look tricky. I hope there is only one way traffic on that line, LOL. Happy New Year, Hank!
ReplyDeleteIt is nice from other side to know someone close/family praying for your safe return... ~ Happy New Year, Hank!
ReplyDeleteSad to be out of work with a hungry family. Interesting story here.
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Hank.
The locomotive driver has a hard life!
ReplyDeleteWow! Living dangerously that's what workers are doing out there. Thanks for this exposure in your poem Hank
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
What an immersive poem - i think i wold gasp and have a stiff drink if aboard that train!
ReplyDeleteso many families can relate, that's the sad part.
ReplyDeleteamazing.
ReplyDeleteVery well done. It is amazing when you think of what humans have endured to care for their families.
ReplyDeletehandsome!
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