Saturday, January 2, 2016

clouds of steam breaking sight...

                                                                                                Attribution: Boaworm
Image: Lava flows from a fissure
turning snow into steam (here)

Shadorma - comprises of a six-line stanza
(or sestet) with a syllable count of (3/5/3/3/7/5)

brilliance of
a spectacle that
breaks the sight
of whiteness
clouds of steam the mountain bright
smoke drifting away

Note: A collaboration with Hank's
grand-child, Nabil, 10 years of age

For MLMM's B&P's Shadorma
and Beyond  -  looking at snow