Attribution: Boaworm
Image: Lava flows from a fissure
turning snow into steam (here)
Shadorma - comprises of a six-line stanza
(or sestet) with a syllable count of (3/5/3/3/7/5)
brilliance of
a spectacle that
breaks the sight
of whiteness
clouds of steam the mountain bright
smoke drifting away
Note: A collaboration with Hank's
grand-child, Nabil, 10 years of age
For MLMM's B&P's Shadorma
and Beyond - looking at snow
Nice execution of the form...!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat words Hank.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Quite the spectacle indeed. Great collaboration too.
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