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White on white across the field
White daisies hold court
Other colors hold sway too
Varied variety are seen
Swaying in the winds
Leading little white cartwheels
Racing over greens
Moving layers of carpets
Fluid apparently alive
Keeping intact secrets shared
Honesty begets the same
Keeping pace with clouds
Moving slowly up above
Contending as friends
Safe haven at mountain-sides
Across serene green valleys
Bidding time with strength
Symbolic of many things
White daisies revered
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Little Creatures #16 - daisies
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interesting tanka sequence
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much love...
the mountains do make for a great metaphor to explore....standing strong in spite of the elements, though eroding a bit as well....
ReplyDeleteHead for the hills and safety it can provide, as everything stays intact
ReplyDeleteYour poem makes me wanna join the sway of these moving layers of carpets. Lively & beautiful to read, Hank. I certainly enjoyed this.
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We find the way to go on. Thank You
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
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What a great story you've written I enjoyed it very much! Bastet
ReplyDelete"Keeping intact secrets shared" that's what I think of with daisies, they don't tell. Nice Hank
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