Saturday, January 17, 2015

Engaged for love

                                                                                        Attribution: Sceptre
Image: Layers of Love (here)

 The Clarity Pyramid has eight lines.
The first line has one syllable, the second 
line has two syllables, the third line has 
three syllables … etc., on to the eighth 
line which has eight syllables.

Only the syllable count
is adhered to here:
Home
where the
heart was lodged

Engaged for love
Could not be better
Couples were grinning wide
Giving life to their feelings

Could one be faulted for failing?

For Jen's hosting at Mindlovemisery's
Menagerie with -  clarity pyramid
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8 comments:

  1. annell4January 17, 2015 at 5:41 AM

    It sounds like Valintine's day is on the way! I liked it!

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughJanuary 17, 2015 at 5:54 AM

    If love's in the home, that's definitely where the heart resides.

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  3. Balqis DBJJanuary 17, 2015 at 6:48 AM

    You're very creative, Hank. I like the formation and the lines. :)

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  4. Pat HattJanuary 17, 2015 at 7:12 AM

    Grinning ear to ear is sure great when such feelings appear

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  5. Holy Ghost WriterJanuary 17, 2015 at 9:43 AM

    Love is a splendid thing

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  6. C.C.January 17, 2015 at 11:18 AM

    Love seeing what direction someone else took this challenging prompt in. It was a lot of fun, wasn't it? Thanks :-)

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  7. Blog It Or Lose ItJanuary 17, 2015 at 7:38 PM

    Very interesting --- it seems to be all roses and hearts --- but the ending --- "Could one be faulted for failing?" --- makes me wonder if it all fell apart in the end?

    Nicely done !

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  8. Brian MillerJanuary 18, 2015 at 5:44 AM

    when a home is built on the foundation of love
    how can it go wrong?

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