Author: Eddie Green
Image: The Cover of Music Sheet
The given words:
maverick nimble march cadence
eel turf waxen goad hew vise
Maverick of his own making
Nimble as a young gibbon
From tree to tree swinging
Marching on in confidence
Smooth talker in cadence
Slippery as an eel on turf
Waxen for quick appearance
Goaded for a kill for love
Irresistible to innocents
Who were hewed big time
Into a vise grip unopened
Trapped with his eloquence
Ladies won devoid of a ploy
Deserting their man willingly
Under the spell of a playboy
They succumbed unwittingly
For Mindlovemisery's Menagerie #30 and
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Ah .. those playboys.. always the same
ReplyDeleteand don't realize the mistake they make until it is too late
ReplyDeleteA trap best avoided
ReplyDeleteActually I've known two of these when I was much, much younger. I've lost track of both now. Your vise grip brought two images. I believe you meant a bench vice and not the tool, 'vice grip'. It flows nicely Hank, I had my eye on him all the time, for sure not envying his tactics.
ReplyDeleteI think the tool was a 'vise grip', sorry I didn't mean it be a pun.
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Yes, I went to the on-line dictionary to check. There was a bench 'vice' and a tool 'vise'. Thanks Dr Jim!
DeleteHank.
Ah ... what a man ... reminded me of Bart Garrett ... the Maverick ... loved that naughty man!
ReplyDeletehmm tough choices
ReplyDelete"Maverick of his own making
ReplyDeleteNimble as a young gibbon
From tree to tree swinging
Marching on in confidence"
I will have this imagery swimming in my head for days...
What a clever post? enjoyed the read especially as you only had a certain amount of words to use.
ReplyDeleteWell written Hank/
I hope my daughters stay away from him!
ReplyDeleteThe nerve of him!
ReplyDeleteWell done Hank great use of the words.
ReplyDeleteThose opening line were brilliant really captured the character! When I was 12 I fell for one of these guys (first crush) learned my lesson and from then on only nice boys for me!
ReplyDeletei have known a few of these slick characters in my day....
ReplyDeleteand you captured him well....
What a vise! Just the thing to help bored ladies lose their wits--unless a good friend extracts them. Fun.
ReplyDeleteThose playboys are sure a charmer for the unwitting ladies ~ Good one Hank ~
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