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Attribution: Couple Riding Wassily Kandinsky
Image: Courtesy of Georgia's
A shadorma:
it’s a 6-line poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5
syllables per lines respectively
Cuddly in
his arms safe from all
How she wished
forever
it should sustain this way but
alas - just a dream
For Bastet's hosting at
Mindlovemisery's Menagerie
with above photo prompt shared
with Mary's at Poetry Pantry # 221
A shadorma:
it’s a 6-line poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5
syllables per lines respectively
Cuddly in
his arms safe from all
How she wished
forever
it should sustain this way but
alas - just a dream
For Bastet's hosting at
Mindlovemisery's Menagerie
with above photo prompt shared
with Mary's at Poetry Pantry # 221
dreams are what dreams are...sigh
ReplyDeleteThis is why we should cherish every moment of happiness and hold it in our hearts.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, delightful illustration.
ReplyDeleteoh sad... i wished she could stay in that place of comfort and love..
ReplyDelete:( its sad when such a beautiful dream breaks................
ReplyDeleteIt would be nice if all of life would be as comforting as a warm dream, but alas the morning comes.
ReplyDeleteBummer just a dream...
ReplyDeleteHang on to the dreams one never knows...
ReplyDeleteWho knows where dreams could lead
ReplyDeletehmm... sweet and so familiar.
ReplyDeleteSometimes dreaming about foreverness is just a dream... Maybe that's not to bad.. Carpe Diem ;-)
ReplyDeleteLoved this, Hank! Sigh....so sad, "alas, just a dream."
ReplyDelete'Alas' is such a useful word for describing the human condition, especially when dreams meet the real world. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteSteve K.
Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Really beautiful Hank.
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful Hank.
ReplyDeleteA perfect pairing and that's a Kandinsky gotta look that painting up.
ReplyDeleteYour shadorma just the right length for a whispy, drifting dream
having a happy place to stay forever, sometimes it does seem like a dream!
ReplyDeletestacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/2014/10/saturday-prompt-2-starry-skies-and.html
no we must move on...from that moment...though hopefully we can find it again every so often....
ReplyDeleteYes, kids grow up. Its hard.
ReplyDeleteDreams can last if helped along
ReplyDeleteThe tone of your poem is dreamy too. Beautifully done :-)
ReplyDeleteit's okay to dream as long as it grants happiness and content only for a moment.
ReplyDeleteAw. It's hard to awaken from some dreams. I like that you play with poetry forms. You do a good job.
ReplyDeleteToo bad it's just a dream --- I feel that pain!
ReplyDeleteNice interpretation of the Kandinsky. I really like his your and your poem.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Hank though sad - just a dream,sigh
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Hank!
ReplyDeleteOh my, great minds think alike...I just posted mine:) it does have a dreamy image to save for rainy days:)
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