Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Tummy Pains Determined

                                                                                    Attribution: Jackhsiao
Image: Hospital Bed
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

Just returned from a procedure, to
check on lower abdominal pains
Confirmed not cancerous 

Gastric
Lingering pain
Endoscopy check performed
Ulcers confirmed but not serious
Ailment is now addressed

A Pensee has a 
2-4-7-8-6 syllable count whereby
line one is the subject line,
line 2 is description,
line 3 is action
line 4 is setting and
line 5 is the final thoughts on the poem.

Written for Tony's hosting at d'Verse OpenLinkNight #119
based on a Pensee Form 
Posted by at

23 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 23, 2013 at 12:46 AM

    Pleased to know it's not the Big C. hope all goes well.
    Yvonne.

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  2. Holy Ghost WriterOctober 23, 2013 at 3:06 AM

    Stinks, but at least it isn't something worse

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  3. Brian MillerOctober 23, 2013 at 4:21 AM

    whew....good they were addressed....and can be treated...
    good to know what the problem is as well so you dont have
    to live with it.

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  4. Pat HattOctober 23, 2013 at 5:00 AM

    Glad it was found out and wasn't something like the big c

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  5. Mystic_MomOctober 23, 2013 at 6:31 AM

    Glad they found what it was, and can deal with it. This is a very tight write.

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  6. MaryOctober 23, 2013 at 7:26 AM

    Good news, Hank! Always good to have things checked out...and when one hears good news, it gives a person a new view of life (I find).

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  7. VictoriaOctober 23, 2013 at 8:33 AM

    So glad all is well. Nice how you used that form.

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  8. GraceOctober 23, 2013 at 9:32 AM

    Thank goodness it wasn't serious ~ The form is new to me, thanks ~

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  9. Kay L. DaviesOctober 23, 2013 at 9:47 AM

    Ugh. Endoscopic procedures can never be described as fun.
    Glad to know it's ulcers and not cancer.
    You have many people around the world who care about you.
    Hugs, K

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  10. AnonymousOctober 23, 2013 at 10:35 AM

    Glad the news is not as awful as it could have been - although finding out seems to have been prettty rough; endoscopy - ugh!

    Nice work on the form - not one I've come across before.

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  11. brudbergOctober 23, 2013 at 12:05 PM

    So glad it wasn't serious .. and a great form of poetry too.. make me curious..

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  12. BeachannyOctober 23, 2013 at 12:30 PM

    Like your pensee. Certainly true one becomes very pensive and introspective when one wants to know why one hurts and what one should or should not eat. Take care. Glad it's treatable.

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  13. TruedessaOctober 23, 2013 at 2:09 PM

    Hank,

    So glad it wasn't serious my friend...

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  14. AnonymousOctober 23, 2013 at 10:21 PM

    So glad it wasn't serious, those procedures can be scary. Just on a side note I do know paw paws have a nice soothing effect on funny tummies! :)

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  15. ClaudiaOctober 23, 2013 at 11:31 PM

    ah it's good if the doctors find what it is so it can be treated in the right way..

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  16. ninotazizOctober 24, 2013 at 2:25 AM

    Have a good rest. we still need to meet before your big day!

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    1. kaykualaOctober 24, 2013 at 2:50 AM

      Ninot Ma'am,
      It appears your schedule is ok? Will email later tonight! Thanks Ma'am!

      Hank

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  17. hyperCRYPTICalOctober 24, 2013 at 8:43 AM

    So glad it was good news Hank! And treatment hopefully will rid you of the problem.
    Kind regards. Anna :o]

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  18. Al-ManarOctober 24, 2013 at 9:00 AM

    Never mind if I cannot get the count right; but take care, Hank. Maybe you have been working too hard, sitting down hours after hours. Take a break and travel EAST.

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    1. ninotazizOctober 24, 2013 at 10:28 AM

      So funny, Pakcik! It is a condition writers suffer from, sitting down for hours!

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    2. kaykualaOctober 24, 2013 at 5:43 PM

      Is it really, sitting down! I thought it has a lot to do with sambal belacan and the spicy stuff. Got to cut down on them!

      Venturing East is on the cards, Pakcik! It'll come!

      Hank

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  19. Lisa A. WilliamsOctober 24, 2013 at 1:52 PM

    Glad to hear everything turned out ok, I know how torturous the waiting for results can be.

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  20. ayalaOctober 25, 2013 at 2:13 PM

    Happy to hear that everything turned out okay!

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