Case of misconstrued insanity
Could he be faulted for a time
Lingering in throes of secrecy
Not really worth a dime
He searched his conscience
He thought he had it made
Sweetie Pie, he even gave a name
But she would rather have him dead
What did he do wrong
Whispering sweet nothings?
Choice of words all along
Not open to feigning
But he was not about to give up
Faint heart given a nudge
Plodding on would be smart
time will def judge...and our words, def can get us in a lot of trouble at times....
ReplyDeleteTime will be the judge if he is sincere or not ~ Happy Halloween ~
ReplyDeleteah - communication is not always easy...and people can easily misunderstand each other... time will tell...smiles
ReplyDeleteHave to watch what we say or in the dog house we will play haha
ReplyDeleteGreat rhythm in this one. I especially liked this stanza:
ReplyDelete"He searched his conscience
He thought he had it made
Sweetie Pie, he even gave a name
But she would rather have him dead"
Greetings from London.
Words can change everything
ReplyDeletewords could be matter, but also maybe not right time or match..then no words will help...so just let the time to be a judge ~ energetic poem!
ReplyDeleteLet time be the judge, hope you had a good Halloween, all be hind with my comments.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.