Fenced in idle thoughts
Yearning to be free but lo!
Forcibly held back
Languishing alone
Tiny room a make belief
domain but not quite
Invoked tsunami
Forced running battle against
the likes of bullies
Fight back a signal
not to harass, only then
they learned to
respect
Written for Joe's hosting at d'Verse OpenLinkNight week #120 and
Chev's CARPE DIEM #334 with Lolly's prompt choice - fence
Written for Joe's hosting at d'Verse OpenLinkNight week #120 and
Chev's CARPE DIEM #334 with Lolly's prompt choice - fence
a powerful set....bullying has reached such wretched heights - behavior unacceptable...let's all do our part,,,
ReplyDeleteHave to all fight back indeed, putting an end to the crap at every feed
ReplyDeleteLoved all but the third was awesome!Bullying ,indeed is a crime
ReplyDeletedef hard....the sad thing is that often the anger is pent up...and we see tragedies in how the bullied respond...i def think we need more open conversation and mediation...letting people know how it hurts...and consequences surely
ReplyDeleteit's too bad that our global society rather than fencing in the bullying thoughts provides little restraint.
ReplyDeleteWell done
Bullying is an awful thing and I hope not so many people ars suffering at the hands of these cowards....that;s what they are cowards.
ReplyDeleteGreat read.
Yvonne.
Well written haiku series Hank ... you have such an own style of writing ... very much "you"
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt series...
ReplyDeleteBullying should end. It's an awful thing to see victims being humiliated, and suffering in the hands of bullies. Makes me cry and feel angry that these bullies exist.
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Invoked tsunami
ReplyDeleteForced running battle against
the likes of bullies ...wow, powerful image..good write
May all bullies get what they so richly deserve!
ReplyDeleteAbsent Fence Post
Definitely fight against bullies ~ Good message here Hank ~
ReplyDeleteFighting back a signal of change..
ReplyDeleteFighting back is the first step
ReplyDeletePowerful write. I liked this a lot. :-)
ReplyDeleteWell said! Very well written.
ReplyDeletestrong set of senryu, Hank ~
ReplyDeleteFence against bullying - indeed
ReplyDeleteGreat choice for the haiku... an important message that we all need to heed. ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
I agree if a person fights back a bit the bullying DOES sometime stop.
ReplyDeleteWell written and a really nice read.
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