autumn leaves
myriad shades red
and gold
begin to fall as
snow - joanne
just as well to usher in
the impending winter months
autumn leaves
myriad shades red
and gold
begin to fall as
snow - joanne
blanketing earth’s surface with
heaven’s goodness of colors
autumn leaves
myriad shades red
and gold
begin to fall as
snow - joanne
and coolness of autumn breeze
sustains romances and dreams
Chev at CARPE DIEM wants us to complete joanne's haiku into a Tan Renga at
Tan Renga Challenge #20 with an addition of two 7-7 lines
Tan Renga Challenge #20 with an addition of two 7-7 lines
Autumn leaves i like the vision of, but comparing them to snow, yuck, hate that white stuff lol
ReplyDeleteLove the autumn leaves, reminds me of my late husbands' favourite song "Forever Autumn"
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your week-end.
Yvonne.
Beautifully written, love your blog :)
ReplyDeleteRomance can be in the air
ReplyDeleteAutumn and love go hand in hand.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Hank. Oh, well done!
ReplyDeleteK
Wow this is a treat Hank ... three wonderful wayes to complete the Tan Renga started by Joanne. Awesome post.
ReplyDeleteSo nicely done. Love the first one best.
ReplyDeletewe are starting to get the colors here...it was so cold tonight...i lost feeling in my toes for a while....tht will def get the trees to changing....
ReplyDeleteall 3 - great completions, yet my favorite was the first....love the line 'just as well....."
ReplyDeleteOh the three nice completions.. very poetic tanka in the end.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautifully romantic completion,loved it:-)
ReplyDeleteexcellent tan renga - all three! ☺
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