Friday, October 25, 2013

Brown and Golden Colors

                                                                                                 Author: Ragesoss
Image: Autumn leaves
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow        -       joanne
just as well to usher in
the impending winter months

autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow         -     joanne
blanketing earth’s surface with
heaven’s goodness of colors

autumn leaves
myriad shades red and gold
begin to fall as snow          -    joanne
and coolness of autumn breeze
sustains romances and dreams

Chev at CARPE DIEM wants us to complete joanne's haiku into a Tan Renga at
Tan Renga Challenge #20 with an addition of two 7-7 lines

13 comments:

  1. Autumn leaves i like the vision of, but comparing them to snow, yuck, hate that white stuff lol

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  2. Love the autumn leaves, reminds me of my late husbands' favourite song "Forever Autumn"
    Enjoy your week-end.
    Yvonne.

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  3. Beautifully written, love your blog :)

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  4. Wow this is a treat Hank ... three wonderful wayes to complete the Tan Renga started by Joanne. Awesome post.

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  5. So nicely done. Love the first one best.

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  6. we are starting to get the colors here...it was so cold tonight...i lost feeling in my toes for a while....tht will def get the trees to changing....

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  7. all 3 - great completions, yet my favorite was the first....love the line 'just as well....."

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  8. Oh the three nice completions.. very poetic tanka in the end.

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  9. What a beautifully romantic completion,loved it:-)

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  10. excellent tan renga - all three! ☺

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