Attribution: Bree
Image: Eclipse Glasses
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)
As when the Sun, new risen,
Looks through the horizontal misty air,
Shorn of his beams, or from behind the Moon,
In dim eclipse, disastrous twilight sheds
On half the nations, and with fear of change
perplexes monarchs - John Milton's Paradise Lost
We are to write a haiku or haiku set from a distillation of the above excerpt:
Tries hard to impose
Hidden in shadowy form
The sun bids its place
An eclipse takes form
Envelops half the world to
submission meekly
Written for Chev's Distillation #3 and shared with Claudia's hosting
d'Verse OpenLinkNight week #116
I think you succeeded in your goal.>KB
ReplyDeleteTotally cool. I like this distillation you have done.
ReplyDeleteGreat distillation... and :-)
ReplyDeletePerfection, Hank!! Just perfection.
ReplyDeleteI love your haiku! Excellent!
ReplyDeletelike your previous eclipse poem, the sun disappearing can be a fearful thing....facing a world without the light.....
ReplyDeleteForeboding true to the spirit of the other genius:-)
ReplyDeleteAloha
Hank, always like what I read here...
ReplyDeletewonderful Hank!
ReplyDeleteawesome
ReplyDeleteTough challenge ~ Enjoyed your response Hank ~
ReplyDeleteCan be scary indeed as the world watches on
ReplyDeleteI saw how you got inspired by Milton ... brilliant haiku !!!
ReplyDeleteHank, a cool poem!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. Must have been hard to do
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with these. My favorite is the second one, though I like the first too.
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