Spur of the moment
Release of a spark varied
In circumstances
Dare graze the bumper
of the speedster in front, a
road bully
transformed
Enduring moments
of ecstasy but next a
monster suddenly
Crying for a fix
Wayward son swiped the meager
earnings of poor dad
Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM #325 with prompt - release
Shared with Theme Thursday’s -
enduring and Sunday Scribbling’s
# 301 - spark
Although I don't have a car I did get your verse. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Sucking away the earnings, a car can surely do that
ReplyDeleteExtra-ordinary take on release ... I hadn't thought that I would read haiku (senryu) about a car, but I like it.
ReplyDeleteNever trust a wayward son!
ReplyDeleteReleasing Precious Water
ah but perhaps the prodigal will come home
ReplyDeleteand all will be forgiven eh...on the road people can def
change in an instant...smiles.
unique take on release in your haiku ~ well done ~ thanks, carol xx
ReplyDeleteDifferent paths can show at any moment
ReplyDeleteGo Daddy-O !
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
Comfort Spiral
=^..^= <3
Wayward sons often need to be cut loose so they can learn to swim on their own!! Nice !:)
ReplyDeletequite a variety
ReplyDeletei like the play on spur
Cheers!
JzB
What a clever piece-liked it:-)
ReplyDeleteInsurance is so important!
ReplyDeleteWords and picture in perfect harmony!
ReplyDeletemany a time I have been swept away by glittering chrome and the sweet aroma of hot oil... :)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! I really enjoyed the image the line 'road bully transformed' created.
ReplyDeleteWith a car like that ... some release indeed.
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