Sunday, October 13, 2013

In a drunken stupor!


Image: Courtesy of Grandma's

I hear voices in a drunken stupor
It's funny! We doctors can sometimes
'see' the future just by listening
I advise you not to go on drinking

(140 characters)

Linda at Grandma's Goulash, Succinctly Yours week 134 provided the
above sketch for a Micro Fiction of not exceeding 140 characters and to
include the word  - stupor.

7 comments:

  1. it can most certainly be bad for your health...all those loose inhibitions running around....smiles..

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  2. Great post.

    Yvonne.

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  3. yeah avoid the drink here at my rink

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  4. Good one, Hank. And thank you for your understanding comment on my poem about Marcel. He had a sad life. He deserved a much happier one.

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  5. Hank, you diagnosed this one very well. If one doesn't want to hear voices in his drunken stupors then don't don't drink. Like I would know?
    ..

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  6. This one made me smile, although doctors are usually far better at seeing into past. So many ailments in our later years are caused by bad habits from the past.

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