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on shimmering wings of blue
inspiration flows
(JRB)
unimpeded, unrestrained
benefiting chosen ones
gently fluttering
on shimmering wings of blue
inspiration flows
(JRB)
in brilliant hues of colors
to set up games of success
Chev had chosen a beautiful JRB haiku of a 5-7-5 syllable
count
and we are to complete a tan renga with 2 lines of 7-7. I’ve
decided
to submit 2 tan renga using the same haiku
Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #8
Hank, I'm honoured to have you add such beauty to my haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks JRB
DeleteYours was perfect to start with!
Hank
i think i like the first one better....the motion and movement in it accentuates that inspiration flows....
ReplyDeletejust to fly flee, shown through your haiku spree
ReplyDeleteI like this Hank. Nice to think of blue as inspiration. I enjoyed both haikus.
ReplyDeletesuccess is yours, Hank! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful completion of the Tan Renga ... JRB will be delighted.
ReplyDeleteimagery both create is simply beautiful..
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed both...thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
i love them both! ♥
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