Thursday, August 1, 2013

Tan Renga of 'Inspiration Flows'

                                                                          Attribution: Garry Knight
Image: A Blue Tit and its Blue Wings
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)

 gently fluttering
on shimmering wings of blue
inspiration flows                        (JRB)
unimpeded, unrestrained
benefiting chosen ones

gently fluttering
on shimmering wings of blue
inspiration flows                        (JRB)
in brilliant hues of colors
to set up games of success

Chev had chosen a beautiful JRB haiku of a 5-7-5 syllable count
and we are to complete a tan renga with 2 lines of 7-7. I’ve decided
to submit 2 tan renga using the same haiku


Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #8 
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 1, 2013 at 2:53 AM

    Hank, I'm honoured to have you add such beauty to my haiku :)

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    1. kaykualaAugust 1, 2013 at 3:02 AM

      Thanks JRB
      Yours was perfect to start with!

      Hank

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  2. Brian MillerAugust 1, 2013 at 5:29 AM

    i think i like the first one better....the motion and movement in it accentuates that inspiration flows....

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  3. Pat HattAugust 1, 2013 at 8:19 AM

    just to fly flee, shown through your haiku spree

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  4. Myrna R.August 1, 2013 at 9:44 AM

    I like this Hank. Nice to think of blue as inspiration. I enjoyed both haikus.

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 2, 2013 at 12:08 PM

    What a wonderful completion of the Tan Renga ... JRB will be delighted.

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  6. Jyoti MishraAugust 3, 2013 at 6:38 AM

    imagery both create is simply beautiful..

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  7. Siggi in Downeast MaineAugust 3, 2013 at 10:15 PM

    I enjoyed both...thank you for sharing.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  8. sunshineAugust 4, 2013 at 5:02 AM

    i love them both! ♥

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