Attribution : bigmick
Image: The Long Distance Runners
Source: Wikimedia Commons (here)
Sunday Whirl with words
circle concrete
hitch illuminate incentive pounding
race
stark scatter strain striking wallow
They would circle
the concrete jungle
With the dogged aim of being able
To run en masse along a route designated
To grab honors befitting a distance runner
Illuminating a race at full throttle to the fore
Such was the incentive
striking at the core
A pounding pace
with no possibility of a hitch
But a guarded regular rhythm of a pitch
In stark
contrast to a quick dash of a sprint
Leaving opponents scattered
way behind
He remembered the strain
of training
At high altitudes of running
To maximize a waning stamina
Mark of a marathon runner
And he was not to wallow
in self pity
But to strive for King and country
Written for Sunday Whirl Wordle #121 and shared with Poets United Poetry Pantry #162
Very nice Hank!
ReplyDeleteYou put the words to good use, Hank!
ReplyDeletei think we all need a bit of a long distance runner within us.not for king or country...but just for our own lives and careers.
ReplyDeleteKudos to him indeed, I'll stick to walking at my feed
ReplyDeleteHank,
ReplyDeleteA real sense of the amazing sense of giving all and of the pride in participating, even in strenuous circumstances.
Best wishes,
Eileen
Well done, Hank!
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ReplyDeletelonely in a crowd............all long distance runners are.
I'm winded from that word-induced sprint
ReplyDeleteAloha, Hank
nice hank..it becomes about the rhythm...setting your own pace as you start to distance yourself from everyone else....what an amazing accomplishment though eh?
ReplyDeleteYou did well with the words, Hank, and told a good story - it takes a lot of endurance to be a long distance runner.
ReplyDeleteI like the direction you took with the words, Hank. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletePamela
Amazing to finish such a race
ReplyDeleteI am certainly glad those days are behind me and I must confess I wasn't thinking of King and country even then! A great post nonetheless.
ReplyDeleteHa, we have just had the annual Sydney fun run here: City to Surf. I don't live in Sydney, but even if I did I would stay home and watch it on TV, lol.
ReplyDeleteAh you grew up in the age of staunch discipline I see Hank. Sink or swim. Interesting poem with other connotations I suspect.:)
ReplyDeleteA great sense of disciplined training for the dream of running your best.
ReplyDeletesuperlike!!!
ReplyDeleteA dream run for him and I just stick to walking only!! Reminded me of Milkha Singh our long distance runner who trained hard, now a commercial film has been made to honour him!!
ReplyDeletethe italics, taken out of context, make another poem, is that purposeful?
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