A Fishy Story - Judith Clay
Image: Courtesy through Claudia at d"Verse
Time in its life that twirls
Time in its life that twirls
When a fish of a kind
In need of space to move
Determines its directions
To fulfill a need to secure
Some form of freedom
Does it help to test a form
To let it be known to the world
For want of a better way
Than to seek the kind help
Of newspaper's sway
With their kind of spin and spat
So to speak a walking advert
But considering the situation
a phenomena a swimming insert
Is bandied about incessantly
For posterity
For posterity
A ‘sandwich carrier’ likely it seems
That walks the pavements, a lone being
Through a dense underwater scene
Through a dense underwater scene
That’s how it is to be so keen
Now weaving between stumps
Now weaving between stumps
To adequately be seen not in the dumps
An underwater advertising!
Nothing serious just some whimsical spinning!
A fishy story
For all to hear and see!
An underwater advertising!
Nothing serious just some whimsical spinning!
A fishy story
For all to hear and see!
Written for Claudia's hosting at d'Verse with Poetics: Judith Clay - to feature
a poem based on the drawings of the artist Judith Clay
a poem based on the drawings of the artist Judith Clay
Hank, I enjoyed your whimsical spinning!! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteha. we all need room to swim and breathe you know....they are lucky they can live without the constant advertising....no commercials or billboards...that can def be overwhelming as well...smiles. swim on....
ReplyDeleteunderwater advertising...this is just too good hank..thanks for the smiles
ReplyDeleteThat's an unexpected twist to the picture!
ReplyDeleteGreat title and I liked the idea of under-water advertising!
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice spin to the picture... and just imagine fish wrapped in newspaper...
ReplyDeleteA fishy story indeed, smiling at that underwater advertising ~
ReplyDelete...underwater advertising --- ha, knowing today well that is not too impossible... but careful of the sharks or rather some angler fish... haha... loved this Hank... enjoyed it... smiles...
ReplyDeleteI would love to know how this clever twist came to you, Hank. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteUnderwater advertising sounds fun and yet another invasion of territory by the mighty humans.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading it. Great job!
Something is fishy there, but with no adds it would be nice to be unaware
ReplyDeleteYour tone and diction matches your content beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThere's no getting away from it is there? ;) Fun to read Hank.
ReplyDeleteSo curious to think of an underwater advertising sandwich - a fish sandwich no less! Thanks, Hank. k.
ReplyDeleteClever fish story - but how else could you sell it - sometimes it's not enough to build it - you have to let the universe know and then they'll all swim your way. Very cool piece.
ReplyDeleteinteresting take Hank..I like the way your mind works..underwater advertising..sneaky move for sure...
ReplyDeleteHank, leave it to you to decry the exploitation of the fish... kind of like how members of Congress should wear "corporate sponsor" logos, right?
ReplyDeleteLoved the rhymes and the way you didn't go too serious on us, but got your point across in a sly way! Amelita
I just can't stop smiling! This is so clever.
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