Image: Courtesy of Tess' Mag
There they are oblivious of the wet
Resolute in not wanting to regret
Clasped in the entanglements of love
A panacea of pain failing to observe
Sweetness belie feelings less of trivia
Turbulent in thoughts but standing on air
Tugging at the cold they don’t deserve
Let loose emotions that hazardous
Exudes warmness having to let
Can man incessant of feelings of guilt?
Obliquely avoiding words of despair
Headstrong pushing seemingly unfair
Twinkling eyes of the lady a respite
Not revealing the dumbness of plight
Softening the savage
breast of the ardor
Kissing in the rain is an obvious splendor
Written for Tess' Magpie 141
"Kissing in the rain is an obvious splendor" - what a lovely poem ... loved it !!!
ReplyDeleteThis pic is certainly bringing out the romantics. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem Pare!... Just like Green Speck, i love the like "kissing in the rain is an oblivious splendor!"
ReplyDeletePareng JJ
WOW! Very powerful...you really can muster up intense images. Well done!
ReplyDeleteOblivious .. obvious ... a contradiction (or is it?)
ReplyDeleteA little bit of love can go a long way
ReplyDeleteEven gets rid of a rainy day
Beautifully oblivious to the wet...
ReplyDeletei am def of the opinion that kissing in the rain, can be a very beautiful thing...smiles...
ReplyDeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteLast line is my favorite. And I so agree. :)
ReplyDeleteWow this is beautiful and you describe the picture inch for inch raindrop for raindrop. But in Malaysia, people are sooo scared of rain.
ReplyDeleteKissing in the rain - magical indeed!
ReplyDeleteI too am a fan of kissing in the rain. What is it about that act? I've often wondered. Your poem takes us very close to an answer. Fine write.
ReplyDeletesmiles...ya know...if a kiss makes you forget the rain..and the world...and those around you...smiles
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteahhh... to be blissfully oblivious
ReplyDeleteSuch a great take on the prompt!
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