Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Micro Fiction


                                                                               Photo by Pat and Jerry
Image: Courtesy of Grandma's Goulash

I need diamonds,a girl's best
friend! Not some cheap glass eye
or rocks! She greedily grabbed the
loot,pumped shots and left them for dead

(140 characters)
as counted through Design215

Grandma challenged us to write a Micro Fiction not exceeding 140 characters
using the photo and the word ‘greedy’

Written for Grandma’s Succinctly Yours New Week #81 and d”Verse's OpenLinkNight 65
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16 comments:

  1. Brian MillerOctober 9, 2012 at 5:53 AM

    yikes...she sounds like one not to mess with you know...

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    1. kaykualaOctober 9, 2012 at 6:32 AM

      Brian,
      It was the wild Wild West all over again!

      Hank

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  2. Grandma`s GoulashOctober 9, 2012 at 7:06 AM

    A very clever and vivid story, Hank. Thanks for playing.

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  3. anthonynorthOctober 9, 2012 at 7:40 AM

    An edgy Micro. Nice one.

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  4. Amrit SinhaOctober 9, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    Aah ... this could be a thriller in the making !!!

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  5. Pat HattOctober 9, 2012 at 1:11 PM

    haha avoid her and just give her the things.

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  6. hedgewitchOctober 9, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    What they call a Smash n Grab, only with bullets!

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  7. Maude LynnOctober 9, 2012 at 2:47 PM

    That's a girl who knows what she wants!

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  8. AnonymousOctober 9, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    Watch out!

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  9. Rachel HoytOctober 9, 2012 at 3:52 PM

    I don't want to be friends with that gal! :P Powerful 140. :)

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  10. Rachel HoytOctober 9, 2012 at 3:53 PM

    Oops... Here’s the poem I shared at the Pub this week. (In case you want to visit without scrolling the big list...)

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  11. henry clemmonsOctober 9, 2012 at 4:47 PM

    I could say, so true, but I need to keep the few readers I have left. Very excellente use of 140 words. and, er, accurate for some I have met. :)

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  12. flaubertOctober 9, 2012 at 7:09 PM

    Sounds like a girl one shouldn't mess with. Nice one, Hank.

    Pamela

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  13. enthusiastically, dawnOctober 9, 2012 at 8:40 PM

    Love the pic, but the chick is one I would be very careful around.

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  14. ClaudiaOctober 9, 2012 at 9:48 PM

    oh heck...that states it true that diamonds are a girls best friend..

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  15. ayalaOctober 10, 2012 at 3:31 AM

    She sounds like trouble :)

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