Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Micro Fiction


                                                                               Photo by Pat and Jerry
Image: Courtesy of Grandma's Goulash

I need diamonds,a girl's best
friend! Not some cheap glass eye
or rocks! She greedily grabbed the
loot,pumped shots and left them for dead

(140 characters)
as counted through Design215

Grandma challenged us to write a Micro Fiction not exceeding 140 characters
using the photo and the word ‘greedy’

Written for Grandma’s Succinctly Yours New Week #81 and d”Verse's OpenLinkNight 65

16 comments:

  1. yikes...she sounds like one not to mess with you know...

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    1. Brian,
      It was the wild Wild West all over again!

      Hank

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  2. A very clever and vivid story, Hank. Thanks for playing.

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  3. Aah ... this could be a thriller in the making !!!

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  4. haha avoid her and just give her the things.

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  5. What they call a Smash n Grab, only with bullets!

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  6. That's a girl who knows what she wants!

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  7. I don't want to be friends with that gal! :P Powerful 140. :)

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  8. Oops... Here’s the poem I shared at the Pub this week. (In case you want to visit without scrolling the big list...)

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  9. I could say, so true, but I need to keep the few readers I have left. Very excellente use of 140 words. and, er, accurate for some I have met. :)

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  10. Sounds like a girl one shouldn't mess with. Nice one, Hank.

    Pamela

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  11. Love the pic, but the chick is one I would be very careful around.

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  12. oh heck...that states it true that diamonds are a girls best friend..

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