Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Check!

Fun And Games

Sensation of fun
Check! Never play with fire
Advocacy reigns

A fleeting moment
Fulfillment without regret
Dare I ask for more?

Submitted for  -  Sensational Haiku Wednesday with theme ' Fleeting' and
                       -  d'Verse OpenLinkNight Week 17

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21 comments:

  1. Pramoda MeduriNovember 9, 2011 at 5:51 AM

    We feel at times if we can ask for more.. i think when we deserve more, we can go for more too..

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  2. Pat HattNovember 9, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    Yes playing with fire will make you pee the bed, at least that's what I'm told, could burn you too..haha

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  3. AnonymousNovember 9, 2011 at 6:56 AM

    Nice use of 'fleeting'. That's all we wish for, fulfilment with no regrets.
    Jamie

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  4. MaryNovember 9, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    Hank, I like this. One can only find fulfillment in those 'moments,' it seems. Fleeting, but beautiful while they last.

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  5. NankaNovember 9, 2011 at 7:20 AM

    Sound message and love those moments however fleeting they may be!!

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  6. Brian MillerNovember 9, 2011 at 7:26 AM

    fleeting moments are still treasures...as is advocacy for sure...

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  7. anthonynorthNovember 9, 2011 at 7:35 AM

    That last one is what it is to be human. nicely said.

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  8. JJ Roa RodriguezNovember 9, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    i always make my games safe... but safely asking for more. LOL!

    nice one Pareng Hank!

    JJRod'z

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  9. ✿November 9, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Ha ha! That IS a lot to ask for. :)

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  10. Laurie KolpNovember 9, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    Live in the moment no matter what...

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  11. ClaudiaNovember 9, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Fulfillment without regret sounds good and love these special fleeting moments..they're precious

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  12. hedgewitchNovember 9, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    Anything without regret is hard to find, but fulfillment would be very nice to come upon that way. Very nicely put together, Hank.

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  13. RHYTHM AND RHYMENovember 9, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    Fulfilment would be nice Hank. Nicely put together.

    Yvonne.

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  14. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 9, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    Sure, you can always ask for more--but you might not get it! :)

    Fleeting Soul Food

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  15. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton November 9, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    true sentiments.
    what a fun message.

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  16. ayalaNovember 9, 2011 at 6:35 PM

    fleeting moments are cherished .

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  17. LisaNovember 10, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    This is a reminder to me. So perfectly put together.

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  18. Jyoti MishraNovember 10, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    If a man insisted always on being serious, and never allowed himself a bit of fun and Games, he would go mad or become unstable without knowing it.
    says- Herodotus

    Really loved it !!

    PS:PS: Been away from blogosphere in past few days, hope u doing fine !!

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  19. Carrie Van HornNovember 10, 2011 at 7:44 AM

    Well spoken Hank!!

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  20. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 10, 2011 at 7:58 PM

    Hi Kaykuala

    Of course not... once your fulfillment is there.. what else is required... I liked this short verse...

    Your site template is same as mine.. I like it too...

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-tears-in-rain.html

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  21. GraceNovember 12, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    I hope that we get what we dream of ...nice share ~

    Heaven

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