Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Check!

Fun And Games

Sensation of fun
Check! Never play with fire
Advocacy reigns

A fleeting moment
Fulfillment without regret
Dare I ask for more?

Submitted for  -  Sensational Haiku Wednesday with theme ' Fleeting' and
                       -  d'Verse OpenLinkNight Week 17

21 comments:

  1. We feel at times if we can ask for more.. i think when we deserve more, we can go for more too..

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  2. Yes playing with fire will make you pee the bed, at least that's what I'm told, could burn you too..haha

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  3. Nice use of 'fleeting'. That's all we wish for, fulfilment with no regrets.
    Jamie

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  4. Hank, I like this. One can only find fulfillment in those 'moments,' it seems. Fleeting, but beautiful while they last.

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  5. Sound message and love those moments however fleeting they may be!!

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  6. fleeting moments are still treasures...as is advocacy for sure...

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  7. That last one is what it is to be human. nicely said.

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  8. i always make my games safe... but safely asking for more. LOL!

    nice one Pareng Hank!

    JJRod'z

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  9. Ha ha! That IS a lot to ask for. :)

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  10. Live in the moment no matter what...

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  11. Fulfillment without regret sounds good and love these special fleeting moments..they're precious

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  12. Anything without regret is hard to find, but fulfillment would be very nice to come upon that way. Very nicely put together, Hank.

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  13. Fulfilment would be nice Hank. Nicely put together.

    Yvonne.

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  14. Sure, you can always ask for more--but you might not get it! :)

    Fleeting Soul Food

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  15. true sentiments.
    what a fun message.

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  16. fleeting moments are cherished .

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  17. This is a reminder to me. So perfectly put together.

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  18. If a man insisted always on being serious, and never allowed himself a bit of fun and Games, he would go mad or become unstable without knowing it.
    says- Herodotus

    Really loved it !!

    PS:PS: Been away from blogosphere in past few days, hope u doing fine !!

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  19. Hi Kaykuala

    Of course not... once your fulfillment is there.. what else is required... I liked this short verse...

    Your site template is same as mine.. I like it too...

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-tears-in-rain.html

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  20. I hope that we get what we dream of ...nice share ~

    Heaven

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