Picture Credit: Brian's
Process note: After a year in poetry writing and still groping I am inspired by the prolific writings of Brian. Brian’s prompt above led me to respond in a few lines of verse at his blog. I later thought it would be great to extend the few lines here and create a proper posting.
In the spirit of gratitude and appreciation this Thanksgiving, thanks Brian and Happy Thanksgiving to all in the blogging community!
In the spirit of gratitude and appreciation this Thanksgiving, thanks Brian and Happy Thanksgiving to all in the blogging community!
Brian
A little patch, a bit of grass
Struggling hard battling the unjust
Struggling hard battling the unjust
At a spot where it so thrives
Against all odds just to survive
Proudly it announced its very presence
Others would trip that instance
To realize realities of form
Are not all that cushy and warm
Brian has that uncanny streak
To match and offer some great tweaks
Of taking on the ordinary on pavements
That others passed off and trampled on
The treasure trove that comes alive
From his pen given that will of life
Of graffiti and witty snippets
On car bumpers or walls of toilets
All didn’t get pass the watchful eyes
Of the mind that jives
And surprise of surprise
A recent Mohawk guise
Reveals a roving talent out of the ordinary
Of no bounds nor boundary
Just to lead the pack
For what ordinary folks lack
Prolific by nature
Hovers above in stature
For loads of reason and rhyme
yeah he's awesome..isn't he... smiles
ReplyDeleteThat's an awesome respond/follow up Pareng Hank for Sir Brian's post.
ReplyDeleteLove it!
Pareng JJ
big smiles. you made my day hank...you should see my grin. i am honored my friend...
ReplyDeleteOh now what are we to do
ReplyDeleteAfter this great verse from you
We will never be able to live with Brian
You've done nothing but left me sighin'..hahaha
Talents abound indeed... for both of you. What a lovely tribute to a wonderful guy.
ReplyDeleteBrian is a favorite poet of mine...and such a genuine, faithful blog friend, too. Thanks for honoring him this way.
ReplyDeleteAnd you're quite the poet yourself!
=)
Claudia - Yes, he is with or without the new hairstyle!
ReplyDeleteParengJJ - ditto and thanks!
Brian - Much obliged! First on your list twice,now gunning for a third!
Pat - thanks Pat! You are one great guy too! The only one with a lovable rhyming ass
Laurie - Yes he is!
Sue - Thanks Ma'am!
lol pat....my head wont fit under my hat...
ReplyDeleteI agree Brian is wonderful...such a lovely share...I love it~
ReplyDeleteI'm lucky to have two Brian's in my life (really, go check my comments, usually, two Brian's make comments) they both do a lot for me
ReplyDeleteBrian - thanks for coming by with repeat visits. Not many do that. Thanks a lot!
ReplyDeleteHeaven - He is, yes!
Zongrik - You are lucky,indeed!
Hank
What a wonderful poem Hank and perfect in your description and rhyme. Every line you describe is Brian, from what he lets us see of course. You are a poet Hank, did you say you just trying it out in just a year?
ReplyDeleteThank you for the poem, and thank you for the newfound friendship.
Oceangirl Ma'am,
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by. Brian is a leader who has shown and created plenty. It's easier to write on him. Just a year but slowly in the beginning, yes!
Hank
Wonderful Hank, loved the post,
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Oh my gosh it's so Brian, wow you know him, i'm impressed, he totally deserves the honour@ and you are awesome
ReplyDeleteAmen..:-)
ReplyDeleteI agree. Thank you, Brian, and Hank.
ReplyDeleteDianne
Oh what a great job you did. Brian is my poetic hero and you really captured his gift.
ReplyDeleteyes, indeed! Brian is a great talent and so encouraging to everyone! Thank YOU for acknowledging him!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit on my Thanksgiving post. I'll be walking off those indulgences today. Enjoyed reading your response to Brian's poem. Have a good one.
ReplyDeleteSuch a nice tribute and shows your poetic ability to "notice" what's around you.
ReplyDeletebravo! Dig this write, so fabulous to tribute Brian. You stated that you still grapple with it all...but you also sound as if you're hitting your stride...continue on, stay true to that 'voice' you always hear; cheers ~
ReplyDeleteI think that maybe a "write a poem about Brian" prompt would be a bit O.K....let's start with this one!
ReplyDeleteKool Writeup.
ReplyDeleteKeep Groping, keep going...one may –and everyone does– get Down...but to hell with that! Stay in the game.
Your poetry is wonderful and an asset to the art-form.
Thank you All,
ReplyDeleteI can see many just love Brian with all his takes. He writes prolific but still he has time for everyone. I can see 2012 to be a good year!
Hank
log live, friendship.
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful dig to original post of your friend.
Excellent poetry,
Happy Saturday.