for inspiration:
summer evening -
empty swing swaying slightly
forward … back … - Alexey
Wishful thinking chills
of waning of winter belies
thoughts of lovely spring
Spring permeates point-blank
Knocking at the door perplexed
Are colors abhorred?
Yearnings of summer
Novelty imagined as
yet to be realized
-
Hank’s
Written for Chev’s CARPE DIEM Haiku Kai Special #71 - Empty Swing
ah but it will be realized, soon enough...spring is coming...there is a nice gentle rhythm in your words as well with the alliteration....
ReplyDeletethoughts of spring sure spring to mind
ReplyDeleteYearnings of summer - swings and life, dreams to be fulfilled. Great poerm
ReplyDeleteSpring will come again.
ReplyDeleteSpring will be here soon
ReplyDeletePoor spring! Nobody wants her?
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