Attribution: Hank
Image: Rahman is standing extreme right (with arms akimbo) Hank is sitting extreme left. Sham who was saved from drowning is standing 2nd from left (wearing beret) Aziz Rahman (Tan Sri) is sitting next to Hank
Image: Rahman is standing extreme right (with arms akimbo) Hank is sitting extreme left. Sham who was saved from drowning is standing 2nd from left (wearing beret) Aziz Rahman (Tan Sri) is sitting next to Hank
This poem was written by my buddy Rahman in remembrance of an episode that happened during our Kelantan River expedition way back in 1963. Rahman was the skipper of the bamboo raft christened 'The Kon Tiki'. We were then just teenagers cruising downstream. Hank was the one who jumped into the swirling waters and saved one of our buddies Sham from drowning. A narration of the episode was posted earlier on (here)
Hank had connected with Rahman a few months back. Surprises of surprises Rahman had the inspiration to pen this poem somehow and extended a copy yesterday. Hank felt so elated and took the liberty to post it for our OpenLinkNight with Rahman as a guest poet.
A POEM FOR HANK
On a
bamboo raft
Pretentious
Kon Tiki
A
teen’s plaything
Barely
afloat
On a
river of memory
So
far… so long ago
Things
we do
Cause we
have to
Heaven
knows
Hell to
pay.
And you
among sordid
Souls
laugh at
Mortality
as teens do
Swam and
swam until
Fate
intervenes, endures
The
frailty of muscles.
Things
we do
Cause we
have to
Heaven
knows
Hell to
pay.
At once
Hank jumped
“In the
nick of time…”
Into
waters deep
To hell,
with
Fangs of
denizens,
There’s
a life to keep
Things
we do
Cause we
have to
Heaven
knows
Hell to
pay.
What
Hank ought to do
Save his
life too
Yet Hank
denies
The one
future soul
Then, away
from Azreal
Was it
for real?
That
instant some dreams sank
And
remain there to this day,
Perhaps
the life we saved
Was our
own, resurface
Today as
solace to soothe
Tragedies
of having grown old
Things
we do
Cause we
have to
Heaven
knows
Hell to
pay.
Rahman Daud
Kuala
Lumpur;
the adventure filled days of teenage! so much to cherish
ReplyDeleteA very beautiful poem brings back those sweet memories.
ReplyDeleteMust have been quite the adventure indeed, you saving him when in need. The things we do when we have to can surely be extraordinary as well
ReplyDeleteWhat an adventure ~ Happy to see lives are saved & your friend pens this for you ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing Hank ~
What an amazing story, Hank; and wonderful that the friend you saved is also a poet like you. Yes, for sure, a lot of teens do things without thinking of the consequences...glad you were there for him!
ReplyDeleteA clarification, Mary. The poet is Rahman but the one saved was Sham. Thanks
DeleteHank
oh heck... what a story...i'm so glad that you jumped in there and saved his life... a beautiful and honorful poem as well by your friend...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story and memories. I really enjoyed that. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Good going Hank, a great verse by your friend to
ReplyDeleteHank,
ReplyDeleteThat was one adventurous story and you were the hero of the day..saving a friend..it must have been a magical moment when you first read your friends poem.
Yes, that surely is a day not many would forget...one friend saving another. Loved this poem by your friend, Hank. I hope he gets to see all the wonderful comments made on his behalf.
ReplyDeleteGayle ~
Hank is a good man for sure---oh yes you are! So glad you have shared this treasure of yours to us or we wouldn't know about this hero by the name of Hank... i loved this... smiles...
ReplyDeletegood for you, and your friend, that you jumped! ~
ReplyDeleteGreat memories of an adventure-filled youth.
ReplyDeleteThat was nice of your friend to write an account of it for you and keep the details. You have a new way to remember the even now.
ReplyDeleteFeel free to visit sometime, Hank.
Hank, what a wonderful tribute to that day. Fate intervened in a good way, here :-) Loved that line "on a river of memory, so far so long ago". Thank you for the kind words at my blog.
ReplyDeletethere is much in life that we do because we have to...
ReplyDeleteit is cool that he wrote this for you to remember the day
what a friend that is...
You are very lucky on many levels.
ReplyDeleteWhat a friend you have in Rahman... and what a friend you are to Sham.. what a story.. wonderful, thoughtful tribute.
ReplyDeleteadventures are the food of poets and song writers - It seems this was a worthy meal - bw
ReplyDeletethe repeated chorus holds the story together so well.
ReplyDeleteWonderful story, Hank.
ReplyDeletePamela