Saturday, May 26, 2012

Joy of Sharing

 Image:1 Making signs of togetherness

Image:2 Mindful of Sharing togetherness

Exudes vibrations
Of emotional delight
And festive gaiety

The joy of sharing
With someone dear to our heart
A togetherness

Feelings of love, a
blissful state of wanting to
give than to receive

Sealed the fate of grief
The sorrow of feeble minds
That succumbed writhing 

Written for Haiku Heights #146 with prompt - Joy 
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20 comments:

  1. Dave KingMay 26, 2012 at 3:53 AM

    Excellent response to the brief. The second one particularly convincing.

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherMay 26, 2012 at 4:56 AM

    Indeed, there IS joy in sharing!

    Cultivating Joy

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  3. Brian MillerMay 26, 2012 at 5:05 AM

    there is a hard turn in that last stanza from love to grief...i would def rather the joy of sharing love...happy weekend hank

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  4. NAWALMay 26, 2012 at 5:54 AM

    Joyous feeling to love and to be loved :) amazingly described and beautiful pictures :)

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  5. carol l mckennaMay 26, 2012 at 6:07 AM

    lovely haiku ~ love them all ~ 'sharing love' is always wonderful ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. Pat HattMay 26, 2012 at 7:12 AM

    The joy is great
    But finding it is sometimes a hard fate
    Then again you never know
    As around the next corner it could show

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  7. anthonynorthMay 26, 2012 at 7:22 AM

    Lovely deep haiku here.

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  8. HazelMay 26, 2012 at 7:38 AM

    I see the 4th haiku as an emotion driven away by joy, and joy of sharing is something anyone should not miss.

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  9. Vinay Leo R.May 26, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    There is definitely joy in sharing, and you bring it out quite nicely, Hank..

    However, I didn't find the captions to the images necessary.. that could have been left to the reader to understand on their own, right? :)

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  10. joanneMay 26, 2012 at 11:37 AM

    Joy shared is joy doubled....nice work

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  11. AnonymousMay 26, 2012 at 5:07 PM

    the third one is very selfless

    valued benevolence haiku

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  12. AnonymousMay 26, 2012 at 9:04 PM

    I like your second haiku. Sharing joy with someone dear to our heart makes the joy so meaningful.

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  13. J Cosmo NewberyMay 26, 2012 at 10:50 PM

    Love the love that went into the first photo!

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  14. Sri ValliMay 27, 2012 at 1:46 AM

    Very beautiful set...Yes, true happiness lies in giving...Lovely!

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  15. PranitaMay 27, 2012 at 2:46 AM

    True words... joy of togetherness is beautiful!
    Do and think not.. Think, then do!

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  16. ChèvrefeuilleMay 27, 2012 at 2:53 AM

    Beautiful verse. Thank you for sharing.

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  17. AnonymousMay 27, 2012 at 6:26 AM

    beautiful!!

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  18. Judith C EvansMay 27, 2012 at 4:33 PM

    Beautiful! I love the line "A blissful state of wanting to give than to receive"...your poem captures the essence of true love.

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  19. TigerbriteMay 28, 2012 at 5:40 AM

    Nice se tof haiku. I like the first wo best :)

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  20. Jaideep RaoMay 28, 2012 at 9:31 AM

    "blissful state of wanting to
    give than to receive" loved this alot!

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