Friday, April 27, 2012

Clarity

Trapped in a quagmire
Of nebulous ideas and
Clarity ignored

Splayed in the summer’s
sun. Heat impinged on his thoughts
Clarity at stake

Whose side are you on?
Hoodwink the old his pretext
Clarity is sought

Haiku Heights Day 28#140 -Clarity
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13 comments:

  1. Brian MillerApril 27, 2012 at 10:14 AM

    i like how you bring it back to clarity at the end of each stanza...hope he gains his clarity...

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  2. Pat HattApril 27, 2012 at 10:34 AM

    Clarity can sometimes be rare
    As things get unfair
    Hard on the mind
    Plus some have their head up their behind..haha

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  3. Kay L. DaviesApril 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM

    Clarity is often very difficult to achieve, Hank.
    I like your haiku.
    K

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  4. JJ Roa RodriguezApril 27, 2012 at 6:01 PM

    One thing i love reading your post Pare, is i get to learn new words... Secondly the way you do it... Smart guy!.. Love it!..

    Pareng JJ

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  5. Sri ValliApril 27, 2012 at 11:43 PM

    clarity ignored...clarity at stake...clarity is sought....Great transition....Lovely haiku!
    Fuddling thoughts

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  6. J Cosmo NewberyApril 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    And clarity delivered. Clearly.

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  7. PranitaApril 28, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    Ur haiku got better and better till the end! Very clear.. :)
    Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku

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  8. GraceApril 28, 2012 at 4:36 AM

    I like that searching for clarity ~

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  9. Jaideep RaoApril 28, 2012 at 5:01 AM

    Strong question in the end, it was running in my mind when I read it!

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  10. TigerbriteApril 28, 2012 at 9:50 AM

    Great trio. Well done.

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleApril 28, 2012 at 11:13 AM

    Nice one.

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  12. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 28, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    Whose side am I on? I wish I knew!

    Seeking Clarity—and Shadows

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  13. Alice AudreyApril 28, 2012 at 1:01 PM

    I sense a story behind the story here.

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