i like how you bring it back to clarity at the end of each stanza...hope he gains his clarity...
Clarity can sometimes be rareAs things get unfairHard on the mindPlus some have their head up their behind..haha
Clarity is often very difficult to achieve, Hank.I like your haiku.K
One thing i love reading your post Pare, is i get to learn new words... Secondly the way you do it... Smart guy!.. Love it!..Pareng JJ
clarity ignored...clarity at stake...clarity is sought....Great transition....Lovely haiku!Fuddling thoughts
And clarity delivered. Clearly.
Ur haiku got better and better till the end! Very clear.. :)Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku
I like that searching for clarity ~
Strong question in the end, it was running in my mind when I read it!
Great trio. Well done.
Whose side am I on? I wish I knew!Seeking Clarity—and Shadows
I sense a story behind the story here.