Image: A Gleaming Roadster (here)
competing with lazy clouds across the sky. He has not flinched his tired
bones. He will bid his time contrary to some thoughts
We look at him through the wrong end of the long telescope of time
far from giving in but what has bolstered his hopes. That no one can tell
He liked her but that was long ago before he went away. He is back
But is she really married?
We look at him through the wrong end of the long telescope of time
far from giving in but what has bolstered his hopes. That no one can tell
He liked her but that was long ago before he went away. He is back
determined to stake his claims
He feels confident. He is no more the struggling wimp those others
He feels confident. He is no more the struggling wimp those others
referred to and laughed at before, unkempt and penniless. He has parked
his Ferrari far down the street. He has made his pile that he is not to
reveal. He is waiting patiently for a glimpse of her - for a surprise.
But is she really married?
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Kim at d'Verse: Prosey - telescope of time
Interesting take: a 'loser' who succeeded, or did he? We still don't know whether he gets the girl...
ReplyDeleteOh - will it all be worth it if she is? Interesting...
ReplyDeleteNicely set up. Really want to know whether she is married!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is different, Hank! Is he only confident because he has a Ferrari or is it because he really likes her and believes she likes him? And then there is the question of whether she’s married. I don’t think much of his chances.
ReplyDeleteWhat makes a person desirable? Too often we focus on the outer trappings. I wonder--has he really changed, and also, is she a person easily seduced by surface instead of substance?
ReplyDeleteHopefully it's not just the fancy car that attracts her.
ReplyDeleteOH I LOVE this tale! It reminds me of a high school reunion where the popular cheerleaders are now not the most successful in the crowd and the nerds come back, and finally claim their due! :)
ReplyDeleteHank I hope he gets the girl in the end. Keep your fingers crossed. I liked Your story here.
ReplyDeleteI'm afraid that the Ferrari won't help if she's already married.
ReplyDeleteNice one Hank, i am happy he is now a success. About the girl, i guess its left to fate
ReplyDeleteThanks fir dropping by to read mine
Much💛love
Great to read Hank as always.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.