Tuesday, September 4, 2018

to fly from the realm of awareness

                                                                                             Author: Chensiyuan
Image: existence in quiet forms (here)

the 11 of 12 given words:
grasp infuse experience form fly from 
sizzle puzzle trapdoor shell form 
nubilous (adj.)) foggy vague or obscure)

to grasp its outright insistence
to infuse with knowledge proper
cautious in tight movements
infuriating when it falters

to experience the richness
of existence in quiet forms
to fly from the realm of awareness
to sizzle beyond comprehension

puzzling when created
avoiding trapdoors along the way
shell-shocked nubilous and disoriented
but among the brave at play

Amber's at MLMM's Wordle #209
Pat at Real Toad's  -  tuesday platform
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13 comments:

  1. VickiSeptember 4, 2018 at 10:42 AM

    Love "to experience the richness of existence in quiet forms" it is all around us.

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  2. nashvillecats2September 4, 2018 at 11:08 AM

    Being aware is a wonderful feeling when it happens, whether if it's a sunset or being aware of how you feel.
    Loved the verse Hank. Well done.

    Yvonne.

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  3. Sanaa RizviSeptember 4, 2018 at 11:09 AM

    "to experience the richness of existence in quiet forms" .. I absolutely agree! Such a wise poem, Hank 💜

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  4. Alex J. CavanaughSeptember 4, 2018 at 11:29 AM

    Puzzling, quiet forms - like a platypus!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2018 at 11:53 AM

    to be ... or not to be??

    sometimes one has to just stop and forget about "awareness" and "experience" and just be ...
    of course, sometimes, when least expected, the actual "aspect" of "being" comes rushing in and we are suddenly swept into the knowing of it ... and somehow, that is, untranslatable. such as it is, often, in life. ironic.

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  6. tonispencerSeptember 4, 2018 at 1:55 PM

    I too agree with Pat about the awareness and experience and just be. I live in awareness of nature, always.

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  7. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 4, 2018 at 2:44 PM

    I most love existence in its quietest forms. I live much in silence. So peaceful.

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  8. Pat HattSeptember 4, 2018 at 2:47 PM

    A puzzle to be brought forth through life

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  9. TruedessaSeptember 4, 2018 at 4:51 PM

    Hi Hank,

    These lines speak to me.

    to fly from the realm of awareness
    to sizzle beyond comprehension

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  10. brudbergSeptember 5, 2018 at 12:00 PM

    I think this describes the way we should exist sometimes.

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  11. purplepeninportland.comSeptember 5, 2018 at 5:35 PM

    'to experience the richness
    of existence in quiet forms'

    That is the way to live! Wonderful poem, Hank!

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  12. MillieSeptember 6, 2018 at 1:04 PM

    Very impressive weaving together of the words. I particularly like the "existence of richness in quiet forms."

    Teresa from Razzamadazzle

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