Thursday, March 29, 2018

Heightened love feelings

                                                                                           Author: Ankita15dombe
Image: A Loving Couple (here)

Heightened love feelings
Treasured diamonds from the sky
When sparkling brightly
Extended for lasting good
Weaving down onto both laps

Chevrefeuille's  Carpe Diem 1399 - beauty-of-heart.
Fireblossom's at Real Toad's  Friday poetic - imagery
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13 comments:

  1. annell4March 29, 2018 at 9:36 AM

    Such beautiful "Loving Couple."

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  2. FireblossomMarch 29, 2018 at 9:37 AM

    This suits the beautiful image of the mourning doves.

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  3. Kerry O'ConnorMarch 29, 2018 at 10:03 AM

    In my first draft of my poem, I had an image of birds nestled together.. so this seems to say perfectly what I had in mind.

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  4. MargaretMarch 29, 2018 at 10:22 AM

    diamonds ... upon laps Love that

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  5. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 29, 2018 at 11:19 AM

    I love the treasured diamonds from the sky.

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  6. nashvillecats2March 29, 2018 at 12:36 PM

    Brought tears to the eyes....both picture and words.
    Thyank you Hank.

    Yvonne

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  7. AnonymousMarch 29, 2018 at 1:10 PM

    love how you wove them together at the end

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  8. humbirdMarch 29, 2018 at 1:28 PM

    I was amazed by so human-like sensations...wow

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  9. Pat HattMarch 29, 2018 at 2:10 PM

    Come together in a web all their own.

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  10. tonispencerMarch 29, 2018 at 6:20 PM

    Lovely poem. Doves and humans, each expressing love

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  11. brudbergMarch 29, 2018 at 11:48 PM

    the conclusion into the laps is great.

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  12. Vivian ZemsMarch 30, 2018 at 5:22 PM

    Loving this loved up couple... :)

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  13. ChèvrefeuilleApril 1, 2018 at 12:56 PM

    Romance ... nicely crafted tanka Hank.

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