Attribution: Kaz Andrew
Image: Fresh Flowers (here)
the 12 given words:
child filled room bright blooms love
season reason wild have when irrational,
3WW
wasteful addicted bruise
The child in her had filled the room
Nauseating to see all the bright blooms
Love for fresh flowers out of season
Wasteful just for few days was the reason
Wild imagination unashamedly addicted
Lots of money to have them imported
Bruised her ego when hubby objected
Seen as irrational but she was not affected
MMT's Sunday's Whirligig#67
Thomg's 3WW # 487
A love offering not well received....
ReplyDeleteVery sad but a verse well written.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Sometimes being childlike is about having joy and enthusiasm for the small magics in life - it's a pity when people don't understand that
ReplyDeleteHaving childlike imagination is grand, too bad it gets stifled across the land.
ReplyDeleteI read something far deeper in this where she is in fact a neglected wife so that she must indulge herself if no one else will.
ReplyDeleteMy nickname is Peter Pan, so I can relate.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately we don't always get what we wish for.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem...love how you fit each word in here...and how you described the child within is not always reasonable.
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