Attribution: David Brogan
Image: The Mysterious Lady in Red (here)
So much depends upon the seriousness of efforts
Throwing his weight in full support of the cause
He could only defy his conscience as a last resort
Couldn't reconcile his stand with those who had lost
So much depends on the relationship among the crowd
Opening up to a barrage of pressure against the grain
He could barely take it without the defense he sought
A desire to alleviate the impending sense of pain
So much depends on strength derived from the savior
He had for survival to search his conscience instead
To look for her through friends who were familiar
The elusive lady to unlock the mystery the lady in red
For Fireblossom Friday at Real Toads
- To start with 'So much depends upon....'
If you want to unlock, you have to have the want to do so indeed. So much depends on us in the end.
ReplyDeleteInteresting
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Your rhymes are so subtle here. I love that.
ReplyDeleteSo much depends on the relationship among the crowd
ReplyDeleteOpening up to a barrage of pressure against the grain...
This is very true.
Relationships is like a complicated dance... Very nicely played
ReplyDeleteAlways intriguing - a lady in red!!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Bjorn, very nicely played!
ReplyDeleteThe use of mystery is at play throughout...great way to close this poem.
ReplyDeleteA true account in verse Hank. Splendid to read.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Thanks for being part of Fireblossom Friday!
ReplyDeleteWell done, a balancing act for sure~!
ReplyDelete"So much depends on strength derived from the savior" Nice!
ReplyDelete"So much depends on the relationship among the crowd
ReplyDeleteOpening up to a barrage of pressure against the grain" Love that!
'the seriousness of efforts' - one need to answer this question first...great poem.
ReplyDeleteRed, I love wearing it! I love feeling all mysterious. Have a great week, Hank.
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