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Image: A kayaker playboating but takes a tumble (here)
Sunday's Whirligig 12 given words:
chasing jagged remains sheared swims missing
wise keep basket broken pilgrim sorrow
Excitement of chasing a dream
Jagged as it might seem
But it remained with a flourish
Sheared of glamour that he had wished
Still getting in the drink
Was not a whim
He took to water for lots of swims
A skilled life-saver nothing was missing
Wise move to be a kayaker playboating
One of the ways to keep himself trim
Enhanced his prowess in his basket of fancies
His resolve was not broken the very least
A pilgrim of his desires he chose to undergo
To be a fresh-water sportsman to discard the sorrow
MMT's Sunday's Whirligig #47 and
Bjorn's at d'Verse's OpenLinkNight #166
Keeping at it no matter the challenge, a good way to be.
ReplyDeleteLOVE those closing lines :D :D
ReplyDeleteHa, we all need to find a way to keep ourselves fit. Kayaking sounds like a good plan!
ReplyDeleteTenacity is a wonderful way to succeed.
ReplyDeleteWell written Hank.
Yvonne.
I love kayaking... but I feel that I'm more for the sea than the whitewater rapids... :-)
ReplyDeleteTumbling can't break us if we are willing to keep on paddling on!
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I think your words would have conjured the accompanying picture even if you hadn't provided it. Peace, Linda
ReplyDeleteWhat a challenge that would be ~ But good for him to be a good sport in that Hank ~
ReplyDeleteGrace
Great lesson in this to keep on trying. I spend most of the year near the Truckee River where we have a run for Kayaking.
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite line: "Enhanced his prowess in his basket of fancies"
ReplyDeleteExciting! I felt myself urging him on to success.
ReplyDeleteThis gave me a wonderful feeling...nice Hank!
ReplyDeleteNot always so glamorous, ha!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the words. A picture of perseverance at its finest.
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ReplyDeletepositive..
WaveSonG..:)
If you hadn't told me I wouldn't of known you used those words. Haven't seem much of you lately Hank. A strong write!
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