Thursday, February 25, 2016

Taking too much liberty

                                                                                     Attribution: Brocken Inaglory
Image: Perhaps Learn a Thing or Two (here)

Pull love by the ear
Why provoke and instigate
They are still too young

Do not mess with love
Taking too much liberty
Contending favors

Love a joint-venture
Young hearts give rather than take
Bites hard when betrayed

For Chev's CARPE DIEM #925 - love
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11 comments:

  1. JaniceFebruary 25, 2016 at 9:02 AM

    Nice trio!

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  2. BodhiroseFebruary 25, 2016 at 9:55 AM

    No need to jump into love before you're ready. Love isn't for the weak of heart! Nice, Hank.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2016 at 10:56 AM

    oh the heartbreak of love. well put.

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  4. B i r g i t t aFebruary 25, 2016 at 11:45 AM

    Well done!

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  5. Pat HattFebruary 25, 2016 at 2:35 PM

    Have to know what you are getting into or you may end up burned

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  6. Omong Mak Long.....February 25, 2016 at 3:01 PM

    Aww the beavers..

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  7. purplepeninportland.comFebruary 25, 2016 at 8:39 PM

    Oh Hank, this is wonderful. Love that photo!

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  8. Dr. Vandana SharmaFebruary 25, 2016 at 9:38 PM

    The last lines give the gist of the love! Beautiful poem.

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  9. Bastet's Waka LibraryFebruary 25, 2016 at 11:48 PM

    love the various aspects of love in your haiku .. a splendid read. Bastet

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  10. CloudiaFebruary 26, 2016 at 7:16 AM

    Wise yet simply written. That's quality!

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  11. JulesFebruary 29, 2016 at 10:49 AM

    So much to learn from nature.
    ;)
    Regards, Jules

    (I saw you had a WP...but I copy an pasted the wrong info -
    Thank you for your visits.)

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