Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Divine


                                                                    Picture by Petr Kratochvil
Image: Red Tulips, divinely dignified 
Picture Source: Random free pictures from Public Domain Pictures.net (here) where you can find more pics by Petr

Pretext to forgive
To err an onslaught to good
sense. Feigned to please

Disturbed divine light
Cavorting in sinful acts
Squirming in darkness

Sensed life’s tortuous ways
Divine wisdom called upon
to right paths of sin

Written for  Brian's dVerse's OpenLinkNight #61 and  Haiku Height’s  September Heights Day 11 P# 170 with prompt – divine - 
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23 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 11, 2012 at 5:45 AM

    Nice triplet Kaykuala, especially the third one is my favorite. Great job.

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  2. Pat HattSeptember 11, 2012 at 7:31 AM

    Such paths can take a ton
    To right under the sun
    But with enough work
    Surely can do it with a smirk

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  3. ghostomSeptember 11, 2012 at 9:55 AM

    A lot going on here. The ying/yang of it all. Nice write!

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  4. Brian MillerSeptember 11, 2012 at 10:57 AM

    i like the turn to recovery from..there is a nice grit in the middle stanza, but there is rescue as well...

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  5. RHYTHM AND RHYMESeptember 11, 2012 at 11:40 AM

    A great write Hank.

    Thanks for the comment I received with pleasure.

    Yvonne.

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  6. Amrit SinhaSeptember 11, 2012 at 12:01 PM

    Nicely composed !!!

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  7. Vinay Leo R.September 11, 2012 at 1:21 PM

    I think the light when disturbed does seem to flail here and there...

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  8. DaydreamertooSeptember 11, 2012 at 2:53 PM

    There is truly something divine in nature isn't there. Tulips are a beautiful flower too.

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  9. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerSeptember 11, 2012 at 2:57 PM

    A beautifully composed triptych--

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  10. Susan DanielsSeptember 11, 2012 at 3:13 PM

    Hank--beautifully done & said.

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  11. signed...bkmSeptember 11, 2012 at 3:55 PM

    very well done ...really enjoyed the middle stanza as well...

    disturbed diving light..

    bkm

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  12. GraceSeptember 11, 2012 at 4:15 PM

    I like the calling for divine wisdom ~

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 11, 2012 at 4:20 PM

    I'd venture to say that 99.9% of the human race knows what it's like to be cavorting in sinful acts!

    Divine

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  14. hedgewitchSeptember 11, 2012 at 4:42 PM

    These sort of all tie up and balance, Hank--I love the idea of tulips as divine, as well, full of that light you're talking about.

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  15. ayalaSeptember 11, 2012 at 5:08 PM

    Nice piece, Hank.

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  16. flaubertSeptember 11, 2012 at 5:17 PM

    Hank, life is all about the ying and yang, isn't it? Nice write and I love the pic.

    Pamela

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    Any pretext to forgive is good for either side! (And some squirming sin isn't always so bad either!) k.

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  18. SheilaSeptember 11, 2012 at 7:25 PM

    I love where you put the line break in this part:

    To err an onslaught to good
    sense

    It works very well!

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  19. Jennifer WagnerSeptember 11, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    A succinct and nicely packaged write. Well done.

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  20. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 11, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    Wow, these are deep, kiddo. Love the format - you packed a ton of meaning into these lines.

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  21. Dave KingSeptember 12, 2012 at 3:04 AM

    Yes, this I like. It all gels and has the smack of truth.

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  22. AnonymousSeptember 12, 2012 at 6:21 AM

    nicely done!

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  23. Kathy ReedSeptember 12, 2012 at 11:51 PM

    A touch of Providencemaybe

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