Image1: Norman drawing a Still Life from memory
Image2: The end product, succulent fruits on a plate and flower in a vase
Two Offerings:
#1 A haiku to wrap up September Heights in Haiku Heights
with prompt –free-
Young minds are amazing
I asked what are you to draw?
Fruits! He responded
But where are the fruits?
Here! He pointed to his head
He could draw free-hand!
#2 A free verse on people watching.
I would relate here
not exactly people watching but rather observing my grandson Norman when he
went about making the sketch.
Young minds, young innocents
Ever so alert wanting to respond
With a high level of imagination
Difficult for the elderly to fathom
A still life drawn from memory
It is something fantastic really
Deftly he took the pencil in one hand
Across the paper a stretch of two lines
Glanced at me, smiled and confidently
drew little circles ever so slowly
turned out to be grapes and strawberries
Bigger roundish blobs to the right following
an orange and an apple and a mangosteen.
To hold back the rear a watermelon
And a flower stalk in a vase, to maintain balance
Triumphantly he next began shadings for depth
A young mind still not that adept
There is an upside in free hand drawing
Anything goes anything to link
But the downside is, he is handicapped
As the shadings to profess depth
are mere conjectures falling back
on experience which he lacks
But he is learning and it’s a big show
For honing his skills the best way he knows
The path is open and only he to decide
What to pick on and which way to strike
His destiny with all stubborn persistence
The whole world wide open at his insistence
The whole world wide open at his insistence
Written for Haiku Heights' Sept Ht's last prompt - free- and d’Verse where Brian is hosting on people watching
Awesome how he could do that right from his mind
ReplyDeleteCan't even get stick people right from my behind haha
And just watching one can see
That spark that sets them free
I'm so impressed by your grandson's drawing. He is an artist - no matter his age.
ReplyDeleteThe poems you wrote are so full of wisdom. I see love and wonder there too. Very nicely done. I really enjoyed this.
excellent hank...and awesome that you are encouraging this as well...kids need that...and have such creativity too....he is already really good and will only get better with time and practice....
ReplyDeleteWonderful. A true gift he holds. Thank you for sharing his work. ~jane
ReplyDeleteHe's really good!
ReplyDeletevery cool how he draws and he will learn and get better with each single drawing..another artist in the family..smiles
ReplyDeleteTwo wonderful works on your talented grandson. It's so amazing to watch children.
ReplyDeleteThis was wonderful. A good display of talent :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Hank. I can just hear your grandfatherly pride in your words. He definitely sound like he has TALENT!!
ReplyDeleteA true artist in the making, fabulous!
ReplyDeleteIt's great to observe our loved ones flowering in their talent ~ Thanks for the personal share Hank ~
ReplyDeleteHe already has such talent, and the older he grows the more his talent will too as he gains experience. I bet there are millions of adults who cannot draw as good as your grandson is already drawing. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteI love that he is also encouraged to do it too.
Great observations Hank.
What a talented grandson you have Hank - you must be so proud of him.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you wrote of him too.
Anna :o]
Sounds like you had a front row seat to a terrific show, Hank! Thanks for giving us the play-by-play. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteWow. he's a pretty fantastic little artist! I'm so glad you are letting him do his own thing and allowing him to grow.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a perfect moment of people watching... your grandson is not only talented he is lucky to have a grandfather like you...
ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent post. Quite the artist of the future,
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
He inherited the talent from his Grandpa!
ReplyDeleteAll so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteNorman is talented, to draw that well at his young age. I love his confidence, likely encouraged by you!!!!!! Love your poem of observation as he created his art. Lovely, Hank!
ReplyDeleteLAURIE
ReplyDeleteYes, he has to be given space to develop his particular interests
PAT
Youngsters with artistic inclination
Have high levels of imagination
They do free hand that we admire
That the elderly very much desire
The memory of the aged gets eroded
Affecting creativity of sorts
MYRNA
I have high hopes for him. He's an intelligent boy. He should make it. Thanks!
BRIAN
I think he should. Talent giveaways make it easier to chart their future. Thanks!
Hank
JANE
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CLAUDIA
It's amazing to see him with a pencil in hand while others are busy at their iPads. Thanks!
Hank
Very nice, Hank! Young Norman has real talent.
ReplyDeleteLovely set of haiku on free, really nice to read them and see how your grandson grows in his being an artist.
ReplyDeleteThank you for all of your great posts and comments Hank.
Visit my new weblog if you like to write a new haiku every day.
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/
Lucky little boy to have a Grandad
ReplyDeletewriting poems for him.
VICTORIA
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KELLY JO
GRACE
BREN
ANNA
I feel so reassured. To encourage him I created a blog for him to post his sketches. I needn't push him but I think I can insist on a fixed no. every week to instill discipline and habit. Thanks
Hank
CHARLES
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SERENA
YVONNE
HAL
At his recent birthday on Aug 21 he got a drawing block. He is seen 'busy' on his own now but no targets imposed yet.
Hank
A clever young man.
ReplyDeleteReally nice. Love both. Haikus are always fun to read, and you can tell when someone enjoys the process of this form, which it fully appears you do. The other is very nicely done, very effective. Thanks
ReplyDeleteTrue and truly put. Great post.
ReplyDeleteImpressive drawing and delightful verse.
ReplyDeleteGreat post. Love the photos of drawing. Thanks so much for the inspiration!
ReplyDeleteLovely post! And so much about artistic freedom. Hope your grandson keep the 'fire in his belly.' to create. Thanks for your encouragement and visits to my haiku all month! It has been a pleasure reading yours.
ReplyDeleteOh, children are endlessly surprising, inventive, and engaging. His lack of experience is why he has his whole life ahead of him, to see the shadow and the light, artistically rendering them through his unique expression. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku!...And loved that sketch....It's awesome!...He'll surely become an artist! :)
ReplyDeletePeace in prison
what treasures - your grandson and the wonderful drawing and your beautiful poems
ReplyDeletewow ..these little artists are magical..
ReplyDeleteWas under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge ...
Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS...being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull's eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world...Loads of special thanks to each one of you...September had been very exciting and a learning month for me...I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure ...Thanks a lot once again...keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly...
A fruit-filled mind is a free mind!
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ANTHONY
ReplyDeleteFRED
DAVE
MADELEINE
KARIN
Thanks for dropping by. He's a joy. He's putting in little touches without too much to chew yet.
Hank
BARBARA
ReplyDeleteANNA
SRI VALLI
FOUR SEASONS
It's a pleasure to visit most during Sept Hts. Thanks for visiting me likewise. Quite hectic month. In fact I missed quite a few.
Hank
ODYZZ
ReplyDeleteThe beauty of haiku is in its simplicity. I find yours as wonderful as the rest. Hectic month it was. A great experience and a pleasure in knowing of others too. Thanks for sharing1
Hank