Monday, July 25, 2011

Frustrations

A Lover's Tiff


Why did it happen

Your welfare is uppermost

But nay, you blew it


It got on my nerves

You are held responsible

Case closed no more talk


I am frustrated

Now you are on your own, dude

I am on my way


Inspired by Haiku Heights # 53

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6 comments:

  1. RHYTHM AND RHYMEJuly 25, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    Short and to the point.

    Yvonne.

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  2. Brian MillerJuly 26, 2011 at 7:28 AM

    ha. you capture well the back and forth in a lovers tiff...it is over, no it is not...

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  3. AnonymousJuly 26, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    Concise ...

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  4. Cassiopeia RisesJuly 27, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Interesting Haiku. Very modern.Nicely done.

    Melanie

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 27, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    Someone has made up her mind!

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  6. Vinay Leo R.July 28, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    You spoke very well with each of the seventeen syllable sets :) Nicely said!

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