Author: AJ.iitm
Image: Poetry in Motion (here)
10 syllables for each line with a rhyme sequence
of a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,d
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you came by from nowhere just like magic - a
twirled around so fast making me dizzy - b
makings of superhuman angelic - a
movements of the world pretty as can be - b
a chosen one and it was such a thrill - c
divine strength the propensity of whims - d
talents showcased with none of the perils - c
twirled around so fast making me dizzy - b
makings of superhuman angelic - a
movements of the world pretty as can be - b
a chosen one and it was such a thrill - c
divine strength the propensity of whims - d
talents showcased with none of the perils - c
to match a primadonna, what a scream - d
but alas, it was only just a dream - d
Laura's at d'Verse MTB - something novel-in-lines
Too bad the magic was only a dream.
ReplyDeleteO dear, just a dream. I empathize with the let down. Nice buildup though before the shift.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by to read mine
Much💖love
Awwww...
ReplyDeletewell - that's a bummer! I feel disappointed ;)
-David
those dreams let us down! but I loved how you rhymed 'angelic' with
ReplyDelete"you came by from nowhere just like magic"
This character certainly sounds dreamlike, but we can always keep on dreaming... :-)
ReplyDeleteI think we've all had dreams like that that we wish were real.
ReplyDeleteI feel disappointed too, Hank! Life can be a bummer.
ReplyDeleteSweet dreams, Hank!
ReplyDeleteHank! I never remember my dreams. I go to bed an wakw up, is all. How sad is that?
ReplyDeleteHope you're doing fine.
Blue
I don't seem to recall my dreams Hank, but loved this verse.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Just a dream, Hank, but you got a lovely whirl of a poem out of it! <3
ReplyDeleteMaybe dreams can come true now when we are slowly opening up.
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