Author: Jonny Joo, One Big Photo.
Image: the luxury of choice offers
less like that of a narrow beam (here)
“Perhaps we are reading the shadows wrong;
forever cannot draw a conclusion.” – Sanaa: Petals of the Sun
“Perhaps we are reading the shadows wrong;
forever cannot draw a circle.” – Winter Moon ~ Part Three: Petals of the Sun
(original quote)
conformity to rules is a mean thing
it reduces the options to venture out
it likely narrows parameters of whims
very much losing its expected clout
open-ended flight of fancy a fringe benefit
Sanaa's at d'Verse Poetics: Dungeons and Derivatives
already ingrained in many youngsters
expected with doses of medicine to bid
for the love of a caring parent that bothers
perceived as visible of a simple practice
one is often led astray to wrongly regulate
to form good habits but at times sadly missed
by not setting a pattern for them to emulate
such are specimens of good upbringing
on a generation engrossed in the current rave
of the social media and gamers existing
unwittingly not given enough space
in reality conclusions lacked the advantage
by elders not given to technological advancement
who are being deprived of the privilege
relied just on common sense of life's experience
Sanaa's at d'Verse Poetics: Dungeons and Derivatives
weejars at MLMM's Photo Challenge #381
Perception, conformity, and invention debate themselves well in your piem Hank.
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In such dungeons we find ourselves in the present day! I thoughtful and resonant poem, Hank.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to much of your issues in your excelent verse Hank.
ReplyDeleteLife is not easy for all at the moment but I find some issues I have are being neglected because of my advancing years.
Thanks for sharing this.
Yvonne.
This line of Sanaa's was meant for you. Well done, Hank. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThe opening line drew me in, Hank,and your entire verse resonated with me.
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliantly executed, Hank! I especially resonated with; "one is often led astray to wrongly regulate to form good habits." Thank you so much for writing to the prompt. 💝💝
ReplyDeleteWe need a little bit of rebellion against the conformity.
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so true, Hank! so well written.
Yours,
David
Thoughtful words and thoughts here! 🙂
ReplyDeleteVery well written Hank.
ReplyDeleteWell thought out, Hank. This makes you think.
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