Image: A Cup (here)
What did I do wrong
Not soupy enough?
I spent the last hour
Surfed the 'Net
for the 'best soup of the day'
Done everything
Perfect list of ingredients
Not soupy enough?
Not just an outright , no!
You can do better than that
No honey!
not that, remember?
My gosh, our anniversary!
Let's eat out!
(55 words)
Joy's at Verse Escape - friday 55
Kerry's at Real Toad's - camera flash
I am not a great lover of soup but enjoyed your post Hank.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
You've captured a moment and a voice perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Izy about capturing moment and voice, Hank.
ReplyDeleteExcellent write, Hank!
ReplyDeleteNot soupy enough! That is so amusing, Hank.
ReplyDeletehaha can't trust the internet, best to eat out.
ReplyDeleteHa. Forget that and you'll e in hot water. Is it soup yet? Time will tell. ;-)
ReplyDeleteSome persons just dont’t like soup.. my other half for an example. Good thing is I will enjoy it all for myself....
ReplyDeleteI like where you went!
ReplyDeletesome thoughtful commentary in this poem... :)
ReplyDeleteNow that's a plan!
ReplyDelete🤣LOL Nice one Hank
ReplyDeleteMuch🌼love
Nice 55, Hank. Too bad such a nice production on the anniversary. We often celebrate on weekends so soup might fill the bill in cool weather. (I also wrote 55, with the title. But it's sort of like an introductory line.)
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Hmmm...not soupy enough? Perhaps that was the intention.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your write.
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