Sunday, May 25, 2014

Heaven’s wrath

                                                                                              Attribution: BukanDas
Image: Before the Thunderstorm (here)

Tilus a Micro Poetry comprises
a syllable count of 6-3-1

Dark and gray skies above
Hidden cause
See!

High waves lashing the shore
Heaven’s wrath
Cleanse!

Tires  stuck  in the mud
Life’s trouble
Sick!

Big roar of the lion
Patience wears
Thin!

Note: Writing to a new Poetic form of Kelvin SM called Tilus

 For Chev's CARPE DIEM #11 - Little Ones
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6 comments:

  1. SusanMay 25, 2014 at 1:17 PM

    I feel the build up here. A storm breaking is all that.

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  2. Pat HattMay 25, 2014 at 2:18 PM

    Wouldn't want to get in the way of that wrath or maybe if one needs a bath haha

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  3. Brian MillerMay 25, 2014 at 3:59 PM

    i like the pairing of heavens wrath and cleansing hank...
    cool on your tilus as well...kelvin created a really cool form...

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  4. Holy Ghost WriterMay 25, 2014 at 4:30 PM

    Even wrath can bring something new

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  5. kelvin s.m.May 25, 2014 at 11:09 PM

    Intense! You wrote these tilus with such energy building up & up. I enjoyed it! Smiles.

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  6. TruedessaMay 26, 2014 at 6:16 PM

    Hi Hank,

    I see you are using Kelvin's new form and you did a wonderful job. I enjoyed reading these.

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