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Image: Chihuahuan Raven in Flight (here) (CCA-SA2.0 Generic)
let the ravens come
let them smile as they pick the flesh
from the battlefield - Managua's
they thrive riding on conflicts
with no qualms picking the spoils - Hank's
let the ravens come
let them smile as they pick the flesh
from the battlefield - Managua's
those who enjoy dirt and scum
are the real opportunists - Hank's
Note: To add 2 lines to Managua's haiku
resulting in a Tan Renga of 5-7-5-7-7
For Chev's CARPE DIEM Tan Renga Challenge #35
- let the ravens come
Wonderfully done ... nice continuations of this Tan Renga Hank.
ReplyDeleteMy ocd see's dirt and scum and I flee or clean it haha
ReplyDeleteOpportunists can pee up a rope
ReplyDeleteOr so Pat told me like there's no hope
They thrive riding on conflicts, you say?
Let them come and I'll show them the way
Roast them, feed them to the cats
Making a fine dessert for rats and bats.