Friday, May 16, 2014

Putting Trust on the Line

                                                                                                  Author: khyri
Image: Chihuahuan Raven in Flight (here)                              (CCA-SA2.0 Generic)

let the ravens come
let them smile as they pick the flesh
from the battlefield  -  Managua's

they thrive riding on conflicts
with no qualms picking the spoils  -  Hank's


let the ravens come
let them smile as they pick the flesh
from the battlefield  -  Managua's

those who enjoy dirt and scum
are the real opportunists  - Hank's


Note: To add 2 lines to Managua's haiku
resulting in a Tan Renga of  5-7-5-7-7

For Chev's CARPE DIEM  Tan Renga Challenge #35
- let the ravens come

3 comments:

  1. Wonderfully done ... nice continuations of this Tan Renga Hank.

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  2. My ocd see's dirt and scum and I flee or clean it haha

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  3. Opportunists can pee up a rope
    Or so Pat told me like there's no hope
    They thrive riding on conflicts, you say?
    Let them come and I'll show them the way
    Roast them, feed them to the cats
    Making a fine dessert for rats and bats.

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