Attribution: Tarotastic
Image: Fishing for Fun (here)
A Petrarchan or Italian sonnet comprises two stanzas
Image: Fishing for Fun (here)
A Petrarchan or Italian sonnet comprises two stanzas
an octave and a
sestet (eight lines and six lines respectively)
The octave has a rhyme scheme of abba abba, while the
sestet is rhymed cdecde, cdcdcd or cdccdc
A syllable count of 10 for each line is maintained here
though not required
though not required
A Vacation
so profound in the South Seas
B Moon half-hidden
over the horizon
B To forget
life’s woes of no consequence
A And
ever so peaceful for all to see
A A
fishing invite accepted with glee
B Making
out and forgetting life’s problems
B Will
trade with any for such occasions
A Can
one be faulted and this is no plea!
C It had
turned dark a rest sorely needed
D Slight
breeze brushing by in the cool evening
C Ripples
on water’s surface break the quiet
D Mermaids
unseen happily chattering
C Confidently
safe not part of diet
D Anglers
above content with just musings
Tony hosting at d'Verse MTB invites to write a sonnet of either the
Petrarchan, Shakespearean or the lesser known Spenserian.
Tony hosting at d'Verse MTB invites to write a sonnet of either the
Petrarchan, Shakespearean or the lesser known Spenserian.
ah - that makes me wanna go on a vacation to the sea... sigh... love the chattering mermaids and the peaceful mood of your little fishing trip..
ReplyDeletelove this air of cheerfulness....
ReplyDeleteAh..ripples on the water...glad you had a good well needed break ..sounds wonderful
ReplyDeleteha. kind glad mermaids are not on the menu.....smiles...need to get my pole out though and go fishing...relax a bit on the waterside....no matter what i catch...
ReplyDeleteI would love to take this vacation and just relax there ~ Thank goodness the mermaids are not on the menu, ha ~
ReplyDeleteWell it certainly sounds peaceful has an Ah appeal!
ReplyDeletehaha mermaids must be very glad to not be on the menu. A nice vacation indeed
ReplyDeleteMermaids.. Such a vacation could make even me wanna take a swim.
ReplyDeleteNot really sure what to say here, Hank. Your sonnet has some technical flaws - counting syllables doesn't always result in the correct meter and the ing syllable is not the stress in evening etc - but your poem as a whole rises above these issues and makes me want to head for the beach, even though it's pretty chilly here today.
ReplyDeleteGosh! More technical than I thought! Had not seriously thought about them really. I wish I could but not really versed in them. Would be more challenging obviously. Looks like am meeting it half-way, not really engaging sonnets the way it should be. Thanks for your inputs Tony!
DeleteHank
A tough prompt for most of us, Hank, but really enjoyed your journey, your tale of beauty & relaxation. A fine effort, terrific poetic.
ReplyDeleteThanks Glenn! Meters, da Dum... and all I conveniently left out. Hoping such would not render them utterly atrocious.
DeleteHank
Nicely done!
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DeleteHank
That sounds like the perfect spot for a vacation
ReplyDeleteI like the fishing that keeps you out after dark, a good time to hear invisible mermaids murmuring!
ReplyDeleteWhat a serene sonnet. The calm sea is so soothing to the soul, so stimulating to the imagination. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWe all yearn for such vacations!!
ReplyDeleteI love mermauds, Hank. But all too often there's something fishy going on ;)
ReplyDeleteSpenser wrote beautiful poetry....