Friday, September 20, 2013

Endorsement of Perfection

                                                                                   Attribution: Comacontrol
Image: Flying Rock Dove
Source: Wikimedia commons (here)

Flapping wings of doves
Ushering whispers of success
Winds of emotions
Haggling for warmth of friendship
Secured through strenuous efforts

Spirits of youth smiled
Despite conflicts encountered
Strength of character
Triumphant yet again pending
endorsement  of perfection

Written for Chev's Little Ones#4 Tanka at CARPE DIEM

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6 comments:

  1. Pat HattSeptember 20, 2013 at 10:18 AM

    Such a spirit surely lets one soar

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 20, 2013 at 2:13 PM

    Nice set of Tanka Hank,

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  3. Wabi SabiSeptember 20, 2013 at 3:55 PM

    I love the whispers of success in the first and the affirmation of success in the second!

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  4. brudbergSeptember 21, 2013 at 2:15 PM

    Your first tanka is very good.. a very strong bridge line...

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  5. AtreyeeSeptember 22, 2013 at 3:21 AM

    "Winds of emotion"-so lovely:-)

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2013 at 4:04 PM

    Very well-written. I liked the second one particularly.

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